“In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.”
The argument provided makes some unwarranted assumptions in order to reach the conclusion that AutoTech's automobile manufacturing plant is set up in Hillview, it will solve all the unemployment issues faced by the city. The argument fails to provide any reliable justification for its tall claim and fails to provide other relevant details required.
First, the argument assumes that the Hillview landfill will be perfect for the automobile manufacturing plant. There are no details provided as to why it has been abandoned and left undeveloped for decades. It could have been used for anything, building a It might be that the land is unsuitable for building anything, it might be harful due to the runoff from factories or any other type of toxic waste materials which might have made it unusable. In this case, why would the company be willing to risk their project by building a plant on a land that might be harmful to humans, and might thwart their attempts to contruct and run the plant, thus leading to a waste of resources and manpower.
Second, the Mayor deems the plant to be a solution to the rampant unemployment in the town. The argument posits that the people left jobless when the Computech computer software programming company abandoned it's facility, would get a job at the plant. The same type of skills cannot be expected from a person working at a software company, and the one working in an automobile manufacturing plant. You can't expect a writer to do the job of an architecture without going through all the training and certification that is required. So, how is it concluded that the plant will recruit all of the unemployed people, even the ones that have no relevant experience in the field or the required skills.
Finally, the argument fails to specify if the unemployed people might be willing to work at the plant or not. It assumes that the plan might be the only source of jobs in Hillview, it doesn’t explicity say that there are lack of jobs in the city. Also, the pay-scale at the plant might not be that high, leading to people looking for jobs elsewhere, where higher pay is being offered. It doesn't talk about the economic situation of the city, how is it faring financially. People might be unemployed of their own accord, not willing to work. Thus the argument has some yawning gaps to fill before making an assessment.
All things considered, because of the lack of credible evidence in it's favour, we cannot render the argument fully reasonable. The assumptions that the manufacturing plan will solve the unemployment issues of the city, and Autotech will be interested in buillding a plant are baseless. The reasoning provided for the claim is ambiguous, leading to a fallacious argument with numerous logical flaws.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d have been used for anything, building a It might be that the land is unsuitable...
^
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'It'?
Suggestion: a; It
...d have been used for anything, building a It might be that the land is unsuitable fo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... an automobile manufacturing plant. You cant expect a writer to do the job of an arc...
^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t concluded that the plant will recruit all of the unemployed people, even the ones that h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., where higher pay is being offered. It doesnt talk about the economic situation of th...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 541, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... their own accord, not willing to work. Thus the argument has some yawning gaps to f...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 470.0 441.139720559 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8914893617 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74660084585 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46170212766 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 705.55239521 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1370277896 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.95 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238203024002 0.218282227539 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07784194228 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630309164963 0.0701772020484 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140046966483 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561213894855 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...d have been used for anything, building a It might be that the land is unsuitable...
^
Line 2, column 254, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'It'?
Suggestion: a; It
...d have been used for anything, building a It might be that the land is unsuitable fo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... an automobile manufacturing plant. You cant expect a writer to do the job of an arc...
^^^^
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...t concluded that the plant will recruit all of the unemployed people, even the ones that h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 388, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., where higher pay is being offered. It doesnt talk about the economic situation of th...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 541, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... their own accord, not willing to work. Thus the argument has some yawning gaps to f...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, may, second, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.9520958084 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 2260.96107784 102% => OK
No of words: 470.0 441.139720559 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8914893617 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74660084585 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 204.123752495 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46170212766 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 707.4 705.55239521 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1370277896 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.95 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238203024002 0.218282227539 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07784194228 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630309164963 0.0701772020484 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140046966483 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561213894855 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 98.500998004 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.