People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those
decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree
or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the
position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold
true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author claims that poor decision makers are those
people who make decisions by considering their emotions
and then later on justify those emotions logically. This issue
is a contentious one but I would like to disagree with the
author because of thee folowing reasons.
Firstly, every good decision in the history does not claim
that emotions were not involved in it and that they have
not been justified later by logic. For example, initially many
people were involved in the feminist movements only
because they were emotionally concerned by the suffering
of women. They took the decision based on emotions and
then successfully justified it with logic to get the right to
vote for women.
Secondly, researchers now suggest that EQ(Emotional
Quotient) is important for a good decision-making
process. So, people who make decisions based on emotions
and later justify logically are not por decision makers. For
example, a political leader who understand the needs of
his/her voters and make decisins emotionally for them and
then justify his/her decisions logically is a better decision
maker than who only takes decisions logically without
feelings or emotions.
Finally, with the increase in technology, if the emotions were
not at all imortant in decision making process then why
researchers are so desperate to add feelings and emotions
in artificial intelligent devices. So,decisons without emotions
and purely on logic are bad decisions. It does not matter it
that decisions are justified later or not. For example, without
emotions robots could kill people if they are asked to do
so. This makes them poor decision makers.
To sum up, I disagree with the statement which is asserted
by the author.The statement says that people who use
emotions to make decisions and afterwards justify it with
logic are poor decision makers.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 26, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , decisons
...s in artificial intelligent devices. So,decisons without emotions and purely on logic a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...tement which is asserted by the author.The statement says that people who use emo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 296.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72464069377 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47972972973 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.670614546 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 5.15768463074 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471676434957 0.218282227539 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191451155768 0.0743258471296 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124954465516 0.0701772020484 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131648066146 0.128457276422 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102582117434 0.0628817314937 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 26, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , decisons
...s in artificial intelligent devices. So,decisons without emotions and purely on logic a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 32, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...tement which is asserted by the author.The statement says that people who use emo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 296.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41216216216 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72464069377 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47972972973 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.670614546 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 5.15768463074 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471676434957 0.218282227539 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191451155768 0.0743258471296 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124954465516 0.0701772020484 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131648066146 0.128457276422 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102582117434 0.0628817314937 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.