related wild life save
As we know that today industries are developed at great extend and becuase of human's greedy nature people cut the tress as well as they build buildings, hotels etc..Which is against our environment also pollution is going on great extend. We should prevent this changes in our country.
Firstly,Youngtown which is environment protection group give notice to smith corporation for not be permitted to develop the land which is a part of youngtown group.Youngtown group is a wildlife preservence . They presreve the wildlife and it conation 300 bird species of that area.
Secondly, We know that a small percentage of the land will be sold to the smith, proposed development will have disastrous consequences for their area, becuase smith want to make hotel on that land which will affect that youngtown group becuase there are many animals and birds were lives their and becuase off all noise of the hotel birds and animals will not be on safe mode.
Thirdly,we know that smith promised to ensure the preservation of the century, but there is no way that their plans will do anything but harm the century which is main issue which should be solve. And as we know there are no circumstances under which this sale will benefit youngtown community, which relies on tourists who visit primarly to see their magnificent bird population.
Concludely, we can say that by giving no permition to the smith's Corporation we can preserve the wildlife of youngtown.Which will save the bird species as well as our nature. In 2014 in india the ratio of wildlife centuries are going downward and it is the main subject of concern so we should take some step to solve this problem which is go increasly in now days.
- night shows local or nation? 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 12
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers. 50
- related to employee of company 50
- related wild life save 30
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...well as they build buildings, hotels etc..Which is against our environment also po...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Which
...ll as they build buildings, hotels etc..Which is against our environment also polluti...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ll as they build buildings, hotels etc..Which is against our environment also polluti...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Youngtown
... this changes in our country. Firstly,Youngtown which is environment protection group g...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Youngtown
...land which is a part of youngtown group.Youngtown group is a wildlife preservence . They ...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oungtown group is a wildlife preservence . They presreve the wildlife and it conat...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...t to make hotel on that land which will affect that youngtown group becuase there are many ...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...als will not be on safe mode. Thirdly,we know that smith promised to ensure the ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of the century, but there is no way that their plans will do anything but ha...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'solved'?
Suggestion: solved
...ury which is main issue which should be solve. And as we know there are no circumstan...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Which
... can preserve the wildlife of youngtown.Which will save the bird species as well as o...
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Line 9, column 342, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...ome step to solve this problem which is go increasly in now days.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254838709677 0.25644967241 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.183870967742 0.15541462614 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0516129032258 0.0836205057962 62% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0483870967742 0.0520304965353 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0612903225806 0.0272364105082 225% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106451612903 0.125424944231 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0416121511921 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78231275635 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0258064516129 0.026700313972 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00322580645161 0.001811407834 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.0903225806452 0.113004496875 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0387096774194 0.0255425247493 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0290322580645 0.0127820249294 227% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1707.0 2731.13054187 63% => OK
No of words: 291.0 446.07635468 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86597938144 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.57801047555 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.288659793814 0.378187486979 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230240549828 0.287650121315 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164948453608 0.208842608468 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113402061856 0.135150697306 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78231275635 2.79052419416 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 207.018472906 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.469332199767 114% => OK
Word variations: 54.412536226 52.1807786196 104% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 32.3333333333 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.6363021697 57.7814097925 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.666666667 141.986410481 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 23.2022227129 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.724660767414 184% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.58251231527 335% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.3573883162 51.9672348444 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.34065934066 1.8405768891 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00772922059553 0.441005458295 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121817410861 0.135418324435 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0767373778537 0.0829849096947 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.702143593205 0.58762219726 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.208246153904 0.147661913831 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00460754857793 0.193483328276 2% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0130321153764 0.0970749176394 13% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274766860888 0.42659136922 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0868975728487 0.0774707102158 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00498813640217 0.312017818177 2% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00997627280433 0.0698173142475 14% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 2.0 14.657635468 14% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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