“The study of an academic discipline alters the way we perceive the world. After studying the discipline, we see the same world as before, but with different eyes.”
Education is one of the key factors that ensures the development of an individual. I agree the fact that education helps altering the way one understands the world. Since people belong to different backgrounds and have different ways of thinking, education enables one to think in a right way by widening the way one think.
Education has played a key role in realizing some important truths throughout the course of history. For instance, it was believed that by our ancestors that the earth was flat. However, it was through literacy that maverick scientists proved that it was actually a sphere that we live in. Moreover, further advancements in the education of space reveal key aspects changed the notion of our existence.
Similarly, there have been existing practices, rituals and beliefs that are considered unconventional in today’s world. For example, the practice of sati was widely followed in India until the eighteenth century. However, daring social reformers, with the tool off education in their hands dared to oppose this practice, ultimately bringing this practice to an end. Likewise, inequality was prevalent in different parts of the world. However, these outdated thoughts were challenged by radical thinkers such as Martin Luther King and Nelson Mandela and brought about the concept of equality and freedom that proved to be beneficial to everyone in the long run.
It is also possible to understand the impact of education on the way an individual thinks. Throughout history, it can be seen how people come forward with groundbreaking ideas based on the processes happening in day to day life. For instance, the process where an apple falls from a tree is a common sight and is often neglected to be of utmost importance. However, Sir Isaac Newton had the courage and curiosity to research on this phenomena which lead him to postulate the laws of physics. Likewise, the star of the solar system, sun, is a potential use of renewable energy. However, this thought did not develop until very recently, with the help of education.
Education plays an important role inculcating responsibilities and manners, which could help in perceiving and reacting to a situation in a more efficient way. Education helps an individual to take up challenges in a positive manner. For example, the manner in which an educated individual handles and economic crisis is more efficient than an uneducated individual. Moreover, education helps an individual to take apt decisions in life.
Specializing a particular discipline does the exact same thing as education. For instance, as a mechanical engineer, an individual views a bridge or a multi storied building from the engineering point of view. Similarly, a doctor tends to view care and understand the difficulties faced by the patient.
Therefore education and specializing in a particular discipline alter the way an individual understands and receive the world. Moreover, with the course of the years education helps an individual to perceive more than it is today.
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| 2018-07-06 | Antony Urmise Jose | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to alter' or 'alter'.
Suggestion: to alter; alter
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Line 1, column 279, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hinking, education enables one to think in a right way by widening the way one think. Educa...
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Line 7, column 429, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he courage and curiosity to research on this phenomena which lead him to postulate t...
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Line 9, column 213, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive manner" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...lps an individual to take up challenges in a positive manner. For example, the manner in which an ed...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ividual to take apt decisions in life. Specializing a particular discipline doe...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... difficulties faced by the patient. Therefore education and specializing in a particu...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, likewise, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2566.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 489.0 441.139720559 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24744376278 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96969835464 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 204.123752495 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527607361963 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 705.55239521 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 19.7664670659 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.53541096 57.8364921388 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.037037037 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03703703704 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.67664670659 278% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167939374624 0.218282227539 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471177803 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048754741054 0.0701772020484 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845585703623 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499403644701 0.0628817314937 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 98.500998004 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.