Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
In the given argument, the author had made number of unsubstantiated assumptions about the palean baskets and about its makers.And later another unsubstantiated assumptions are "woven" baskets are not uniquely palean,as they found their existence in Lithos which an ancient village across the Brim river from Palea.
The author's first mistake is to assume that woven baskets are made by the Palean people because this particular distinctive design pattern had found by archaeologists in the immediate vicinity of this Palean village.And this assumption is seemed to be not so convincing because there is no clear evidence that people of Palean had made it.And even only by the existence of "woven" baskets in palean can't be assumed that its palean's unique design pattern.
And the next mistake made by author is by the discovery of existence of "woven" baskets in the Lithos which is an ancient village across the Brim river from palea and concluded that "woven" baskets are not uniquely Palean. And for this assumption it pretty clear that author had stated this only on the basis of archaeologists discover. And their discovery may leads to many wrong assumptions because the woven baskets may be existed in other areas which might be far from Palean or Lithos that archaeologists not at discovered.So, basing only on the archaeologists discovery that can't be concluded that "woven" baskets
are not Palean's unique design pattern.
And the last and most important mistake of author is that assuming that Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found in Palean village and its immediate vicinity and he justified his conclusion that "woven" baskets are not uniquely Palean unique design pattern by this assumption. As archaeologists not found any existence of boats in Palean,cannot lead to assume that they had not never made boats. Their might be a possible case that boats are made by them and as the years passed they may be disintegrated or taken by any foreign invasions.So this assumption cannot be taken into consideration.
Ironically if the initial assumption of author may be correct and based on this he cannot exaggerate the remaining assumptions which are having many flaws and even concluding that "woven" baskets are not unique design pattern of Palean village is even more worsening?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 11.1786427146 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 392.0 441.139720559 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3137755102 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19675226792 2.78398813304 115% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.380102040816 0.468620217663 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 705.55239521 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.471057884232 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.67365269461 538% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.749968648 57.8364921388 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 231.444444444 119.503703932 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.5555555556 23.324526521 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240647296272 0.218282227539 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12107715467 0.0743258471296 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751756509943 0.0701772020484 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148542205265 0.128457276422 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463982758626 0.0628817314937 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.4 14.3799401198 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 48.3550499002 40% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.197005988 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 12.3882235529 234% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.