In this age of intensive media coverage it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
I do agree with the authors statement that In this age of intensive...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... woman as a hero. In support of my view i will provide three reasons. However i d...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...f my view i will provide three reasons. However i do concede in some case it is possibl...
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...w i will provide three reasons. However i do concede in some case it is possible ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... todays era, what you see is sold only. Hence the main focus of media is conspicuous ...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...a, what you see is sold only. Hence the main focus of media is conspicuous celebrities lik...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... conspicuous celebrities like film stars ,sports men politicians and bushiness men...
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Suggestion: ,
...cians and bushiness men etc. For example , if any film star comes in any grand wed...
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Suggestion: wedding
...e , if any film star comes in any grand wedding wedding function, he will attract the whole cha...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...econd reason behind this is interest of general public. General public is very keen to know ab...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: Public
...ind this is interest of general public. General public is very keen to know about celebrities ...
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Suggestion:
...w about celebrities life and wants to be like them. It again increase the focus o...
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Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...fe and wants to be like them. It again increase the focus of media on celebrities. For ...
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...us of media on celebrities. For example, TV serials which are based on celebritie...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...example, TV serials which are based on celebrities life are more popular and major source ...
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...popular politicians, celebs attract more public attention than general debate. ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...and it is true for media bushiness too. Hence the third reason is media also needs mo...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ia is making reputation of celebs among general public and being paid for it by those celebrit...
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Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...case, media covers the story of general pubic also. For example , a single click of P...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...media covers the story of general pubic also. For example , a single click of Pakist...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...story of general pubic also. For example , a single click of Pakistani tea seller ...
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Suggestion:
...ame internet sensation and today he is a billionaire super model. In conclusi...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ionaire super model. In conclusion, i agree with author that in todays era it...
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Message: Did you mean 'public'?
Suggestion: public
...n media attention, if you are a general pubic. However in some cases it is possible t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... attention, if you are a general pubic. However in some cases it is possible too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 321.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65420560748 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49016122227 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538940809969 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7549240714 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6315789474 118.986275619 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31900195999 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845390500126 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152528283403 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176299344143 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180918423892 0.0667264976115 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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