"In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product."
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion expressed above. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.
While in any filed, we only reap the benefits of the front end product, but we often forget the efforts of the backend that have been put into to make the product useful for us. This is a general phenomenon that most of the time we see people praise what appears to them or what satisfies them first handedly and usually forget to acclaim those who worked in the process of bringing the product to life. The give claim emphasises that the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important that the final product itself and I agree with the claim made due to various reasons, experiences and observations of my own.
Firstly, to get a final usable product, it is imperative to have a backend team that shall put in many efforts to make the final product possible. Irrespective of success or failure of the end product, importance to the process or the efforts that we are putting in must be give. This will ensure a quality final product. For instance, consider the Chandrayaan 3 project undertaken by the India Space Research Organisation (ISRO). The endless and persistent efforts has made the project successful today sending us pictures and information of the moon's south pole. This project was initiated right after the failure of Chandrayaan 2 mission. It would be appropriate to emphasis that that despite the failure of the initial mission, the ISRO team has continued putting in the efforts and never stopped. It has learned from the mistakes in the failed endavore and kept correcting them. Subsequently, today India is sucessfully on the moon.
Further, if we give more importance to the final product forgetting the fact that we have to work for it, may only pave way for anguish. For instance, if a sports person only thinks or dreams of becoming a national player, he will be left only with his toughts. He will never become a nationl player unless he takes steps towards becoming one. He must stop eating unhealth ot deleterious food, he must focus on body structure and positive mindset to reach his final destination. Not doing anything and giving importance to day dreaming will lead him to ruins. Similar is the situation with every enterprise. It must focus on the process rather on the product. A highly planned and productive process will ensure proper final product.
However, there might be situations where we have to place importance on the final product. If we have no idea of the destination, if we are desultory in our actions, we will not be able to reach to the final product. We shall have a picture of the final product while devising the process to reach there. If we do not so, we may end paving a wrong route to the destination and may get subsumed before reaching. For instance, consider a cloth manufacturing comapny. It keeps producing bland, white cotton cloth in tons with an intention that the it can be dyed and transformed into desired colours and forms. This is considered a highly risky situation and there is high possibility that the company's cloth will not be sold. However, if the company has decided on producing a green cloth and having a ready customer base is more safer option. So sometimes it is important to have a final product and work towarrds it.
Therefore, it is imperative to conclude that, while it is important to have a picture of the final product in mind, it is very crucial to focus on the process. The quality of the process shall determine the ultimate product, and the mere focus on the final product without working on making it a reality shall never reap fruits to any enterprise. Thus, it agree with the give claim that in any enterprise, process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...em or what satisfies them first handedly and usually forget to acclaim those who ...
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Line 3, column 678, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...on. It would be appropriate to emphasis that that despite the failure of the initial miss...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ave way for anguish. For instance, if a sports person only thinks or dreams of becomin...
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Line 7, column 542, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...on cloth in tons with an intention that the it can be dyed and transformed into desire...
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Line 7, column 824, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'safer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: safer
...oth and having a ready customer base is more safer option. So sometimes it is important to...
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Line 9, column 357, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'agrees'?
Suggestion: agrees
...reap fruits to any enterprise. Thus, it agree with the give claim that in any enterpr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3082.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 648.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75617283951 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60320249641 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 975.6 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0086967219 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46875 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235906897989 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716426421208 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875535518925 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165776123721 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890847274716 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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