In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should be required to step down after five years.
The statement above states a point which contradicts the place irrespective of the field.There are both disadvantages and advantages for people in power to step down after five years or not based on circumstances in which the power brings a better society or a government or any institution.
Firstly,The power given to any person to a particular time is to prove that whether he is capable of doing better things or improving the required areas for a good shape.Like for example,you get a promotion once in bank from a clerk to a manager after two years or three years and to higher level manager etc.There are few advantages although which brings not only new person for a period of time but the complete ideology would be changed.Like for example,a politican who wins a power promises like good schools and better roads in the locality if he is elected if he doesn't achieve this and the for the next cycle the same person asks for votes to get the power which is not an ideal one.If he could not fulfill then he should step down from the power which broke the trust of people.Atleast the new one could get a chance to do better.
Secondly,In case of government officials it is usually most of the time power is controlled one among all.If he is got this power for the current period the next one some other official has to get.This has become a business just to earn to money for own sake and well-being and not improving the state.If any official is not moving from his power then there is no chance of further generations to become an embody of the government.If any official crosses the term of five years they genuinely should choose the best one who can handle the government with great knowledge.
Thirdly,Although the same can't be functional for when of education system and business at certain point because if the power is changed every five years then new rules and new implementations could make very difficult in both the fields as it can't be sustained for a longer time if there is no consistency.For example,Jeff bezos runs his business from past years but he never choose to give his position to their kids or any other as it took so many years for him to reach there who knows if the power is given a chance it comes backs to where it started.In the same way education system runs for upliftment of future generations this can be done by people who are experienced for long time in power.
In the conclusion,Though there are both pros and cons in the person to step down after a period it depends on the type of field where it is actually necessary and is required a change for a good development of people and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, as for, as to, for example, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2177.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59282700422 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74470952233 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455696202532 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 94.0 23.0359550562 408% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 233.739170872 60.3974514979 387% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 435.4 118.986275619 366% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 94.8 23.4991977007 403% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 5.21951772744 490% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 7.80617977528 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297393057809 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185536903596 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495525017735 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185536903596 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495525017735 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.6 14.1392134831 337% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.47 48.8420337079 -32% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 12.1743820225 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.53 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.38706741573 132% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 39.6 11.2143820225 353% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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