In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
In today's fast-paced digital world, any field needs different people from with different backgorund and different age. The contibution of all people make any field rich and dynamic. The notation state that in any field of inquery, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important comtribution. While I partially disagree with the statement, but I belive that begineer can also contibute in any field with their freeh perspective and outlooks.
Fist of all, any field that need expertise and experiance, there must need expert people. They use their experiance to solve a problem effective and more accurately. For instance, in medical field the doctor need to become more expert to handel any critical situtaion and need to use their experiance solve the problem effectively.
Additonally, any field that need create new knowleage like reserch expert can make a lots of difference from the neophyte.
As expert has prior knowledge about the subejct they can easily create new knowlege based on their perious knowlesge. In contruction field, the expert engineers can develop complex structure like the tallest tower of the world. A lost of hindreence will come but they use their problem solveing and critical thinking to solve the problem effectively.
Moreover, expert learns from their mistakes and previous history. They have an understanding about the field through their mistakes and make a differenece easily compared to the novice. For example, in teaching profession if you have experiance you can become a professor othewise you can't be a professor, so for some field expertise is a must to excel/
However, in somefields where begineers can contibute a lot of things, because they have a new outlook of the world and can see the world in new perspective and can solve any problem with modern tools and technique. For example, in the technology world, in silicon vally, many beginner building a lot of technologial product like facebook, google which are fueling the fast-paced digital world. They have contribted a lot in these field though they are beginner.
In conclusion, in any field expert are more likely than the beginners to make important contributions, but begineer can also contribute with their fresh prespectives and outlooks. They can also flourish the tech world easily, but in most of the field expert plays a major role to make an inportant contribution.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w knowleage like reserch expert can make a lots of difference from the neophyte. ...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...knowleage like reserch expert can make a lots of difference from the neophyte. As e...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a lots of difference from the neophyte. As expert has prior knowledge about the su...
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Line 6, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r problem solveing and critical thinking to solve the problem effectively. Mor...
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Line 8, column 286, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you can become a professor othewise you cant be a professor, so for some field exper...
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Line 8, column 340, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...essor, so for some field expertise is a must to excel/ However, in somefields where ...
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Line 10, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... like facebook, google which are fueling the fast-paced digital world. They have ...
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Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hough they are beginner. In conclusion, in any field expert are more likely tha...
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Line 11, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...on, in any field expert are more likely than the beginners to make important co...
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Line 11, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pert are more likely than the beginners to make important contributions, but beg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19537275064 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78073537246 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462724935733 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7576501993 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364925468853 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148733654823 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160226492229 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208003839983 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133990315984 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w knowleage like reserch expert can make a lots of difference from the neophyte. ...
^^
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...knowleage like reserch expert can make a lots of difference from the neophyte. As e...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a lots of difference from the neophyte. As expert has prior knowledge about the su...
^^^^
Line 6, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r problem solveing and critical thinking to solve the problem effectively. Mor...
^^
Line 8, column 286, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you can become a professor othewise you cant be a professor, so for some field exper...
^^^^
Line 8, column 340, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...essor, so for some field expertise is a must to excel/ However, in somefields where ...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like facebook, google which are fueling the fast-paced digital world. They have ...
^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hough they are beginner. In conclusion, in any field expert are more likely tha...
^^
Line 11, column 52, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, in any field expert are more likely than the beginners to make important co...
^^
Line 11, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pert are more likely than the beginners to make important contributions, but beg...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 389.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19537275064 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78073537246 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462724935733 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7576501993 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.277777778 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364925468853 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148733654823 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160226492229 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208003839983 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133990315984 0.0667264976115 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.