The best way forasociety to prepare its young people
for leadership in government,industry,or other fields is
by instilling in themasense of cooperation,not
competition.
Writearesponse in which you discuss the extent to
which you agree or disagree with the claim.In
developing and supporting your position,be sure to
address the most compelling reasons and/or examples
that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement states that more importance should be given to creating an environment of cooperation instead of competition for the development of better leaders in the society. The quality of cooperation is important for a person to be a good leader. Cooperative skills are one of the most looked after skills in a leader. Competition on other hand might not serve the purpose of leading a team.
Leadership is a virtue which is required to direct a team or group of people into the right directions. Leaders are people who are responsible for major decision making and for the well-being of the teammates. A person who is a good worker may not always be a good leader. Leadership skills are not easily found and takes lot of efforts to develop.
Secondly, a leader also requires to be a good team member. A leader's responsibility doesn't end with instructing the members in the right direction. A leader has to work at the very fundamental level along with other teammates to make sure that the work is done properly. So, cooperation also plays an important role here. If the leader is not cooperative with other colleagues, it may be possible that he might not get the cooperation he seeks from the team members in return, which might eventually hamper the whole functioning of the team.
For the members to follow the orders and work as instructed by the leader, it is important that the members respect the leader. This respect can be gained only through cooperation and treating others as their equals. Leaders work hard to maintain cooperation in the team. Leaders make sure that all the team members work in unity. A Team which is united can do wonders. The team as a whole can be proven so efficient in fulfilling their purpose in the company.
Competition is also an essential component for the hollistic development. Competition provides the deserving candidates with the right opportunities. Competition develops an environment which forces the candidates to give their best. Competition provides the industry with the finest talent present for them. But, competition in the team can cause havoc. Members of the same team should not be competiting internally among themselves. It can lead to severe mayhem which can disrupt the whole work cycle of the team.
So, leaders should make sure that he/she directly or indirectly dont create a environment of competition in the team. Leaders themselves should not promote competition inside the team. Thus, leaders themselves should not believe in the quality of competition more than cooperation. Competition with different teams is preffered as it can lead to the development of the most efficient product as an outcome of different teams trying to outdo the other teams.
To conclude, competition is essential for individual's development but leadership skills require more emphasise on imparting the virtue of cooperation among the team members instead of competition and so it is best for the society to impart the quality of cooperation instead of competition in the young generation to prepare them as better leaders of the tomorrow.
- The following is taken fromamemo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According toarecent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other 60
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position 62
- The following appeared in a memo to the board of directors of a company that specializes in the delivery of heating oil Most homes in the northeastern United States where winters are typically cold have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heati 66
- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of WLSS television station Over the past year our late night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news During the same 58
- The best way fora society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in themasense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...andidates with the right opportunities. Competition develops an environment which forces th...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 34.0 12.9106741573 263% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2601.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 512.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.080078125 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92235475569 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40625 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.446764008 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9032258065 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5161290323 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09677419355 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173238278531 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566708805207 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420766582014 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109376928137 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416970625823 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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