The best way for a society to prepare it’s people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, Not competition.
Cooperation is the act of working together in order to achieve a common goal.This skill or act can is practised at several instances or places.With this said,the most effective way for an industry,region or society to encourage improvement and prepare youths for authrority positsionts is by encourage them to co-operate with one another or societies rather than compete against them.
Firstly, all individuals have unique strentgths and weakness,imagine want the different a group of individuals working to achieve a common goal; they will all bring differenbt strengths thatwill commensuratefor the other team members weakness. For Instance, AfcTA, this is the union formed by most heads of African countries. The aim of this union is togenerate revenue by encouraging trading activites without imposing tax between within these countries.This union was formed as a result of cooperation between it’s leaders (Presidents, head of the Country)
Another example is the ECOWAS group, one of the advantages of residing within these ECOWAS countries is that, it’s citizens can travel within the indvidual countries without requiring VISA. As a result of this, it encourages its citizens to tour other countries which yield to growth in their countries’ GDP from tourism.
One of the product of Competiton is Fear as a result of one party being stronger or smarter than the other. For instance, the fight between the fulani heardmen and indigines of the yoruba land (Kwara). These two ethnic groups are very powerful Individually and which resulted to a conflict that led to the death of many. However if their leaders decide to cooperate, the fulani can increase their cattle rearing and the yoruba’s their agriculture produce and export to other states thereby increasing the states’ revenue.
Inconclusion, both the ECOWAS and AfcTA union has provided nothing both growth in the revenue for its participating members by encouraging trade within itself and also making their land feasible for tourist.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, as for, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50955414013 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03937305233 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.138593128 60.3974514979 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.0 118.986275619 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160410567392 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611320224411 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460982766601 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894097767052 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447290499962 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 14.1392134831 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.