The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leadership in anything, be it a government body, industry, or other fields comes with experience and experience comes with when one has gone through many different stages of life. In my honest opinion, a mix of cooperation and competition both are required at different stages so as to be an effective leader.
In today's world, there is a cutthroat competition in every sector. To beat this a competitive nature is required so as to come on top. For example, If one has done MBA and wants to work in big multi-national company then that person has to compete with his or her peers to get in that company and sustain there. If there is no sense of competition in a person then he or she will not be able to clear the first stage of the hierarchy. This is about the first stage itself, Now in every office or workplace there is a hierarchy of work and one has to pass through it to become a leader. For example, In PWC, Which is a multinational company, to be at a top leadership position one has to go through lower level position namely, manager, deputy manager etc. A sense of competition is required because for every such postion there will be someone as good as to fill up the respective place and to beat that person fight is required.
In later stages, When one has reached at one of the leadership roles than cooperation comes in the picture. For example, If you are a CEO of a company then cooperation with the lower level subordinates is required to create a healthy environment. This environment gives you more productivity and efficiency which is must for thriving. When you are at higher position of leadership then having quality of team management becomes must and Cooperation helps to build it.
Thus, It depends on the circumstances in which one is in and according to the situation one has to choose between competition and cooperation. An amalgamate of both would be perfect to become an effective leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, thus, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65204678363 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85457549892 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46783625731 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9965240616 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.066666667 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185068216638 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649631667353 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465668975344 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110890204003 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585052355374 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.