The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Young people are the future of the society. They play a pivotal role in shaping the society. It is incumbent on schools and parents to guide the young people in a way that benefits the socity. In order to prepare the young people for a leadership society should develope a sense of healthy competition among them. It is very necessary for the the growth of younger generation
First of all, a healthy competion develops a sense of growth among young people otherwise they will be soddened in complacency and happy with their own prgress. competion is the best measure of where we stand among the society. consider for example, the school or colleges which does not provide a sense of competion among children, they became complacent and has no desire for growth and by doing so they are depriving the young children to become a great leaders.
Moreover, All the best corporations in the world are engaging in the healthy competion. They do not tend to share their technologies among themselves. By the cooperations the corporation may get behind their peers and loose the best markets. Consider for example the ceo's of google and microsoft are competing among themseleves to outdo in everyfields and by this means public are getting benefiited.
However there should not be too much of competitiveness among us otherwise it leads to degradation of much valued quality in our lives. it may harm the society in some cases. consider for example a political leader tend to malign their opposition by alliging false staements and vice versa. In this case the public are not able to decide the veracity of their leaders and eventually they loose faith on their leaders. So scholls and parents shouls not develop a sense of too much competitiveness among children
In conclusion, a healthy competition is very important among the younger generation which leads to their growth and helps in becoming a great leader. There should not be too much competitveness among the younger generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99099099099 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78235318337 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477477477477 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6897306044 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7647058824 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188853256213 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06926577838 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871510605303 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116551933992 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113056604199 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.