The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
From the dawn of humanity, every community has needed a true leader. There has been a long controversy as to what characteristic a successful leader should enjoy and how the youth should be prepared for leadership. As far as I am concerned, while I believe there is no single "best" charectristic to be a leader, a sense of cooperation as well as competition are necessary.
Like pieces of a modern computer or automobile which need to work together consistantly, every team, with no exception, needs to hone cooperation. In this regard, a leader, as the head of the team, needs to have the charectristic even more. Nowadays, computer engineers and programmers have to work consistantly with each other in every step of developing a piece of software: planning, coding, deboging, to name but three. The manager of a programming company needs to not only work with every member but also teach to his/her team how to work together. This is also true for other fields. The presendent of a country must enjoy the skills of teamwork to be able to work with every part of the government.
Pushing the members of a team, competion also is essential to every team. Members of a team should have this sence to enhance themselves. A sence of competion makes a football player to keep practicing in order to be better than not only his teammates but also players of other teams. The very desire to be the best makes a member of a scientist team to stay up late. Leader of a team must have this sprit to hone this charectristic in his subordinates. Moreover, in order for a team to surpass its rivals, the leader needs this essential sprit to make his/her best.
A leader who knows only how to compete but not how to cooperate fails to succeed. Imagin an orchest leader only desires to be the best, but does not know how to intract with his/her member. During a performance, no mater how hard he/she tries, as long as he/she does not work with the members consistantly, the performance will be a fiasco. Also if this leader does not know how to compete, even if he/she can cooperate with his/her members, his/her team will not be the best.
To sum up, in my opinion, a leader must have many charectersitic among which a sence of cooperation and competition are the most essentials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 342, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ntly, the performance will be a fiasco. Also if this leader does not know how to com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1890.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70149253731 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8763878544 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450248756219 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2604234164 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0824303797411 0.243740707755 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322247619617 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455984161352 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476213232417 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035746981945 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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