The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
For a society to prepare its next generation for higher and official posts, it is indeed important to instill a sense of cooperation among them. But what infact, is more important is to create a sense of competition among them. Hence, disagreeing with the claim, it is evident to say that if a position is available for anyone, no one will actually work hard for that position, while if it is a valued position, even those who have one in a million chance, will give it a shot. Also the person keeps on doing better when he knows his position is too ephemeral to put into words.
Now, if there is a sense of competition, the person will automatically understand that the position is of a huge responsibility and it will be a humongous mistake to not work up to what people expect. Let us take the finest self evident example, that a person who runs for a position, which is higher in the political hierarchy, knows that with huge power comes huge responsibility. And hence, the person will be competitive, always having an edge over his counterparts, doing as better as he can, for the people.
Furthermore, on a position that requires leadership, a person who has risen upto a higher level of his/her job will know the hurdles that he has faced in attaining the position. So, there will always be a fear of losing his position because he will know that there's a person somewhere, which has been working even more harder than the former, that obviously comes from a sense of competition. And this in turn will push the former person to do much better than what he actually can. For example, a manager who is known to be more efficient, eventually leading to more sales for some firm will have higher chances of promotion than others who are his rivals. This will create a sense of fear in the former person; a fear of others being able to match his ability, and hence the person will push his limits and do even better than he can.
So, for a society to have its young people, to turn into a more fruitful leader, it requires them to be competant over cooperative. As mentioned, it creates a sense of competition and in turn creates a value for the position, and also, a fear of losing the position.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 479, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... a million chance, will give it a shot. Also the person keeps on doing better when h...
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Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... over his counterparts, doing as better as he can, for the people. Furthermore,...
^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... his position because he will know that theres a person somewhere, which has been work...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
... somewhere, which has been working even more harder than the former, that obviously comes f...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5225 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62582249019 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9444417609 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.214285714 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5714285714 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191587915647 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832073177157 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839935088604 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144705332872 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605950334412 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.