The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree

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The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

In today's world of cut throat competition, where one wrong choice can bring about one's demise, it is important that young people today be instilled with, a sense of competition, similar to the real world they will soon make their careers in.

One phrase that has immortalized Darwin is "the survival of the fittest." This is true in the case of humanity, right from the beginning of its stay in Earth. When dinosaurs went extinct over 65 million years ago, mammals were the predominant species. From the plethora of animals that could have risen to dominate the world, humans have fought their way up the food chain to occupy the place it currently is in. Competition is what brought out the best in us, from the discovery of fire to the invention of the light bulb, a sense of competition has always been an integral part of the human thought process. In fact, at a more fundamental level, humans have the quality of ambition, the burning fire of desire that can't be satiated. In economics, there is a widely said phrase, "there is no such thing as a free lunch. " We earn what we get through our competitive spirit. The same cannot be said about cooperation however.

Cooperation without competition leads to stagnation. For example, if we take the case of a Samsung electronic devices giant. In the absence of competition, the Samsung will not see any reason to promote innovation, leading to a shoestring budget on the research and development side. Competition is the very driving force that brings about innovation. We are able to enjoy cheaper prices and superior quality commodities today due to competition, every company wants more customers to buy their products today. If we take the case of Ford, an automobile manufacturing company which introduced the concept of assembly lines to speed up manufacturing of cars. This was done so as to reduce the cost off manufacturing and at the same time provide consistent, top notch quality cars for the consumer. This in turn ushered in the age of manufacturing which saw many a company take big strides in improvement in quality, quantity and affordable prices for their commodities. Hence the very quality that defines us as humans has led to the innovation we see today and must hold a higher degree of importance than cooperation.

However, at times cooperation also plays an important role in productivity. For example, if members of a team working at Apple, decide to not work together but rather act selfish and not cooperate, the productivity of Apple would see a sharp decline. The quote "Unity is strength" sums this up quite nicely. However, the company can hold seminars and classes to improve cooperation among its employees. The same cannot be taught with regards to competitiveness. Hence it should be taught to young people when they have still not begun their careers.

The quote,"Great men are not born, they are made," sums up the idea that competition is to be favored over cooperation in order for humanity to take greater strides forward and to make future endeavors successful. We must not curb but embrace the inherent trait of ambition that makes us human in order to lead more prosperous and happy lives.

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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266025641026 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.144230769231 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0721153846154 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480769230769 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0384615384615 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116987179487 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0304487179487 0.0406280797675 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89613917808 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0336538461538 0.030933414821 109% => OK
Particles: 0.00641025641026 0.0016655270985 385% => OK
Determiners: 0.0945512820513 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176282051282 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192307692308 0.0148568991511 129% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3235.0 2732.02544248 118% => OK
No of words: 543.0 452.878318584 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9576427256 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82725184711 4.58838876751 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327808471455 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.254143646409 0.280924506359 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16758747698 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123388581952 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89613917808 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 219.290929204 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 68.8199443775 55.4138127331 124% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8846153846 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0187481152 59.4972553346 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.423076923 141.124799967 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8846153846 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.674092028746 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 46.2989800255 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.79166666667 1.64882698954 109% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382802869381 0.391690518653 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0862479605539 0.123202303941 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0652354942235 0.077325440228 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474971964955 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.205418120387 0.149214159877 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133139945301 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067711940638 0.0892212321368 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.38058308099 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0798167895908 0.0692045440612 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253976310872 0.275328986314 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405235127153 0.0653680567796 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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