The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Preparing young people for leadership in various capacities in this world is very important. The prompt suggests that youth should be prepared for leadership positions through instilling a sense of cooperation in them, rather than a sense of competition. I mostly agree that cooperation in a leadership position will help prepare youth for the following three reasons.
First, if people are not taught to be more competitive then they most likely will not be as diligent. If there is no competitive spirit, then each person fighting for a certain leadership position might not strive to do what it takes in order to achieve that postition. For example, if there were no competition within the presedential race, than there might not be new ideas and reasoning for a new candidate to run in the race. Competition brings out a spirit in people that pushes them to be better. Therefore, it would be important to have a sense of competition.
Second, instilling in people a sense of cooperation will help them become more likeable and gain more support as leaders. When President Obama ran for president, many of his supporters came from him being a likeable person. He was kind and addressed needs that everyone felt were important. As people learn to be more cooperative, it can in turn cause others to support them and be more willing to befriend them.
Last, leaders who are more cooperative will help create an environment of unity. Those in leadership that cooperate with others essentially work well with others and help others around them feel important. Just like in team sports, if the captain includes others in his ideas and plans, than other players will be on the same page and will help execute the plan. This cooperation within a team unit creates a feeling of unity that results in a winning environment that helps the team to succeed. Cooperation within leadership capacties will help various fields to improve in different aspects.
Overall, this is a complex issue that is rather difficult to address. There are both benefits to being both competive and cooperative. I mostly agree that cooperation within a leadership capacity will help prepare youth for these postitions and will benefits them in different ways.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...e are not taught to be more competitive then they most likely will not be as diligen...
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Line 17, column 251, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
...are youth for these postitions and will benefits them in different ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05107526882 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75960336663 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2874248085 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.95 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192163678005 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683585038528 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602613873313 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126731990218 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721045046176 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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