Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Change is the nature of the universe. I believe we cannot bound the change in number of 5 years or so but people in power should be changed after a particular period.
consider, a country like India were government changes every 4 years. After a period of every 4 years election happens for the prime minister and people are given the freedom to choose the government. Well, we can see India is a country which is developing drastically. This policy of change in government is helping India to emerge as a powerful country day by day. Now, suppose if the same leader serves for 10 years then we will not be able to know what more benefits we can get until and unless we get to see different people in power. We will not be able to know the pros and cons of various parties.
Also, in business if we will have the same person as CEO for 20 years it will be a big issue as it may happen that the person is not aware of many new things or techniques to handle a company. In case, a company is incurring losses and it needs revitalization the most important thing required is new idea. There can be many cases like a young person in power can have new innovative idea for bossiness development which the other person cannot have. So, we should give chance to new people so that new ideas can come up for the development of the business. The same goes for the educational system, chance should be given to different people in a regular interval of time so that our educational system can also grow accordingly with different new ideas.
Finally, following a rule of change of people in power in every 5 years will be a good proposal so that more number of individual gets chance to show there talent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Consider
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Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
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... Finally, following a rule of change of people in power in every 5 years will...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241887905605 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.144542772861 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0973451327434 0.0880659088768 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0530973451327 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383480825959 0.0444667217837 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135693215339 0.12292977631 110% => OK
Participles: 0.023598820059 0.0406280797675 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46872296876 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265486725664 0.030933414821 86% => OK
Particles: 0.00294985250737 0.0016655270985 177% => OK
Determiners: 0.094395280236 0.0997080785238 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0501474926254 0.0249443105267 201% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0148568991511 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1707.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 315.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41904761905 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.292063492063 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.165079365079 0.280924506359 59% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.114285714286 0.200843997647 57% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0793650793651 0.132149295362 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46872296876 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498412698413 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 50.3453155693 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2485592468 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.928571429 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 39.0079365079 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.7 1.64882698954 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153713613224 0.391690518653 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.159700175449 0.123202303941 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0992988162287 0.077325440228 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559047347767 0.547984918172 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185685237962 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707652890034 0.161403998019 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576853672303 0.0892212321368 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.294702469222 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0542220353854 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126947823381 0.275328986314 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285212179751 0.0653680567796 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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