Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Should the characteristics of a society's men and women be judged based on their role models? This question raises controversies among people, on or hand some argue that the heroes chosen by a society can actually be used to sum up their values and believes while other will argue that just from looking the heroes chosen by a community is not enough to know that values and believes of such society.
Studying the characteristics of a society should actually be done by examining the characteristics of such society men and women and the heroes and role model they chose. This is because the values portrayed by the role model and heroes that are celebrated from a society don necessarily reflect in the values and believes of the community. For example Nelson Mandela of South Africa is viewed as one of the heroes from that country; he was popular and recognize for his contribution to stopping the appetite war that plagued South Africa. Nelson Mandela's name is almost synonymous to peace because he even have a novel peace price to show for it. Though Mandela is celebrated and seen as role model and heroes to so many South Africans but this peaceful characteristics is not replicated by the men and women of South Africa because we all know about the xenophobic attacks that the South African citizen are doing out to foreigners in that country.
Like Mandela another very good example Mahat Maghandi of India, who is celebrated in several societies India and a role model to so many men and women in that part of the word. We all know that Ghandi was celebrated for his believes of non violence. Though accepted as heroes to so many Indian citizens, and this peaceful act is not replicated by the citizens of India because we still have cases of violence in that part of the world. Also in the middle East where many Muslim clerics have been celebrated for preaching the peaceful nature of Islam as a religion and which is actually accepted as believes of the men and women of those countries like Iraq, Afghanistan etc, but these countries are one of the most dangerous areas to live on earth because of constant killings and wars those areas. Also some the most deadly terrorist group like Alkaida and Isis origin can be traced to countries that claim to preach about peace.
However, those that argue that examining the characteristics of the heroes chosen by a society can lead to understanding the characteristics of such society men an women might point out the fact that, it is not all South African that participate in xenophobic activities or all Indians that carry out act of violence, but as humans we are dynamic and to understand the characteristics of someone by even studying that person it self is more co.plex than we all think because time and environment tend to change the way we perceive things as humans let alone understanding a whose society by just looking at the characters of some selected heroes and role models from that society.
In conclusion, since most South Africans and Indians tends to negate the values and norms of their heroes it shows that the characteristics of a society's men and women is difficult to understand from just their role models.
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- Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, look, so, still, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2657.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 554.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79602888087 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69279052803 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.407942238267 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.9 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.418327974 60.3974514979 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.785714286 118.986275619 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.5714285714 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311167431655 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121100751061 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100142211712 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193903908248 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547550411477 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.