Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive. Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Culture of a place can be described as the rituals and traditions people follow. From clothing to eating to language to lifestyle everything is heavily influenced by the culture of that area. In the past and in many places even today, culture is one of the driving forces of a society. However with evolution and urbanization some areas became more important than the others. These cities became the focal point of the nations for multiple reasons such as urbanization, high population, size of development or the economic support it is providing the country. Usually, more often than not these cities became the main economy generators of the nation.
However more often than not, with modernization of these developments, cultural traditions had to take the back seat to make way for modern living. People are renouncing their traditional ways of living to fit into the modern society and way of living. This has resulted in many cultural traditions dying out as urbanization is not able to sustain these traditions. Thus I don’t agree with the authors’ point of view that a nation’s major cities are the generators and preservers of the cultural traditions. However, said that, government should ensure that their major cities thrive as they support the economy of the rest of the nation.
In the twenty first century, as cities are growing they have become the backbone of the nation. They support the major part of the economy of the nation. They are the job generators, service providers, economy boosters of the country.
However cultural traditions of a country is also a very important and integral part of any country. National governments should try to preserve it too. But instead of adding this pressure to the already burdened major cities, the government should try to generate and preserve culture and tradition with some of the smaller cities. This will not only bring in more tourism to the nation but will also take away some pressure off the main cities. Moreover there will more economical generators for the country.
To summarize, I think the point of the author was not entirely correct. Although major cities do need financial support from to thrive as they are the financial supporters of the nation, but they are not the preservers and generators of the country. However the government should put their time and effort into conserving their culture with some of the smaller cities and towns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion:
... main economy generators of the nation. However more often than not, with modern...
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Suggestion: However,
... economy generators of the nation. However more often than not, with modernization...
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...away some pressure off the main cities. Moreover there will more economical generators f...
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Suggestion: some
...fort into conserving their culture with some of the smaller cities and towns.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248888888889 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.131111111111 0.157235817809 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0755555555556 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0688888888889 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0311111111111 0.0444667217837 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128888888889 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0288888888889 0.0406280797675 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69437548522 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0288888888889 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00444444444444 0.0016655270985 267% => OK
Determiners: 0.131111111111 0.0997080785238 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177777777778 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0148568991511 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2443.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 403.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06203473945 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.382133995037 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.300248138958 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191066997519 0.200843997647 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111662531017 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69437548522 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 219.290929204 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454094292804 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.522860513 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3181818182 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2132176086 59.4972553346 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.045454545 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3181818182 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.674092028746 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 48.342995714 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.75961538462 1.64882698954 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34036006576 0.391690518653 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.167207949995 0.123202303941 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0999948640848 0.077325440228 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.569546652909 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156437916873 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142442729559 0.161403998019 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763462545265 0.0892212321368 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479293443214 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687630105093 0.0692045440612 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251787737162 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507716235761 0.0653680567796 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88274336283 225% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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