Claim: Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Reason: It is inappropriate—and, perhaps, even cruel—to use public resources to fund the arts when people's basic needs are not being met.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based
The statement contends that information which is already fact it can be sometimes not believed by people who are actually using it and particular information might be helpful for people for getting knowledge but that information would be proven false in future.
The main reason for disagreement is that Human history is rife examples of information mislead them drastically and even egregiously. science is a discipline, users evidence and proof to postulate theories, after elaborate discussion and confirmations. Still there are instances were science misled
people. example calcium oxalate is a compound in tomatoes and in kidney crystalline deposits( kidney stone ).And hence tomato consumption was taken for the cause of kidney stone Formation.
The second disagreement reason is that when people more and more rely on information sometimes creates problem. example is that for weather prediction people refers government information which derived from some sources without verification they accepts it and In some situation information might be got wrong at that time would people pay for it.
The chief reason for Agreement is that information is very useful while we analysing previous data Means if we want to study price of stock in future then at that time we have to know about previous year information (details about stock).In everyday life people refers many details for knowledge.
In fact I find the statement is probably disprove depend on situation and
Merely information is important for Normal users and we should not neglect all information coming to us considering it may prove inaccurate in the future. it is also dangerous. we must be vigilant if we adopt it or keep watching if we avoid accepting it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... that information would be proven false in future. The main reason for disagreem...
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...n would be proven false in future. The main reason for disagreement is that...
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Suggestion: Science
... them drastically and even egregiously. science is a discipline, users evidence and pro...
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Suggestion: Still,
...elaborate discussion and confirmations. Still there are instances were science misled...
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... there are instances were science misled people. example calcium oxalate is a com...
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...e are instances were science misled people. example calcium oxalate is a compound ...
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...stances were science misled people. example calcium oxalate is a compound in tomato...
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Suggestion: deposits'; deposit's
...d in tomatoes and in kidney crystalline deposits kidney stone .And hence tomato consumpt...
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...kidney crystalline deposits kidney stone .And hence tomato consumption was taken f...
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Suggestion: And
...dney crystalline deposits kidney stone .And hence tomato consumption was taken for ...
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... cause of kidney stone Formation. The second disagreement reason is that w...
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... information sometimes creates problem. example is that for weather prediction people ...
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...metimes creates problem. example is that for weather prediction people refers gov...
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...ers government information which derived from some sources without verification t...
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Suggestion: accept
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...at time would people pay for it. The chief reason for Agreement is that i...
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Suggestion: In
...us year information details about stock.In everyday life people refers many detail...
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...yday life people refers many details for knowledge. In fact I find the...
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...rs many details for knowledge. In fact I find the statement is probably...
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...robably disprove depend on situation and Merely information is important for Norm...
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... it may prove inaccurate in the future. it is also dangerous. we must be vigilant ...
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...te in the future. it is also dangerous. we must be vigilant if we adopt it or keep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, second, so, still, then, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38768115942 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87582348964 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.1236858024 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.181818182 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108071927738 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390474591488 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342927253205 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0476985567096 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321367682584 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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