Claim: The surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Reason: Great achievements by a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists will ensure a good life for the majority of that nation's people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Nowadays, there is a controversial issue about what the surest indicator of a great nation should be. Depending on the personal experiences and beliefs, some people may claim that the greatest nation lies heavily in its rules, artists, and scientists by virtue of their contribution to the country, which will ensure a good life for the majority of the nation's people. As far as I am concerned, while it may be well to premise the statement in the first glance, I do not want to maintain that the great achievement by a nation's rulers, artists and scientists is the only indicator of a great nation. In addition, there is always other factor such as the well-being of people.
In the first place, I have to admit that the great achievement and effectiveness of the nation's ruler definitely have a significant impact on the development of the nation. A effective leader's accomplishment can be examined by his citizens because they are always in accordance with each other. For example, after the economic crisis in America, it is president R that led his people towards rejuvenating the economic situation. It is undeniable accomplishment, the New Deal, benefits numerous American people to help them get back confidence for life. Thus, we can proclaim that the rulers effectiveness can unsure the people's good life.
Another compelling argument for the author's argument is that the contribution that artists and scientists strive for also comes up with an influential nation. That is to say, without the effort from artists and scientist, there is no possibility that the inner beauty of the country will be explored and the potentially multiple competence will be developed. For example, it is the famous Chinese author Mo Yan’s achievement on winning the Nobel Prize that not only spreads the Chinese culture to the world, but also tempts people to read more books and cultivate the interest of reading of many Chinese people. Such example can also be easily applied to the scientific field. Thus, the artist and scientist's effort to the nation also should be given emphasis as indicator of a great nation.
However, by stating that the great nation can be ascribed to the profound contribution by rules, artists and scientists does not mean that the good life of people can be ensured only by their struggling. In other words, the claim that the surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists does not always hold true. From my point of view, we cannot ignore that the well-being of people is playing an increasingly indispensable role in measuring the greatness of the nation. According to what president Lincoln has said --- of the people, with the people, for the people, we can see that the well-being of citizen has become an indispensable and significant indicator of a great nation.
To sum up, given the reason above, we may safely draw a conclusion that the great achievement by a nation's rules , artists, and scientist will ensure a good life of people from both the economic competence and the cultural side. However, crucial though aforementioned factors are, we cannot ignore the increasingly important effect of the well-being of the people on the measurement of a great nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...at achievement and effectiveness of the nations ruler definitely have a significant imp...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...mpact on the development of the nation. A effective leaders accomplishment can be...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
... development of the nation. A effective leaders accomplishment can be examined by his c...
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Line 4, column 585, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'rulers'' or 'ruler's'?
Suggestion: rulers'; ruler's
...or life. Thus, we can proclaim that the rulers effectiveness can unsure the peoples go...
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Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... Another compelling argument for the authors argument is that the contribution that ...
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Line 10, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the great achievement by a nations rules , artists, and scientist will ensure a go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0258302583 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87788519288 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440959409594 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1742210949 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.2 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506619395373 0.243740707755 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160268977118 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122551459808 0.0758088955206 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310238229693 0.150359130593 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125634105186 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.