Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and suppo

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Schooling is a necessary part of a persons life. It is integral in shaping up ones...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nes future and the future of the country . Thus it is not only the responsibility ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... future and the future of the country . Thus it is not only the responsibility of th...
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Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o decide what is being taught in schools . Hence, the nation should ensure that st...
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Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lum until they enter college. Today , while the government has a say in curri...
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Line 5, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent has a say in curriculum of a student , the topics covered depends largely on t...
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Suggestion: .
...cs covered depends largely on the school . This means that private schools who hav...
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Suggestion: .
... giving them an unfair advantage in life . It is the responsibility of the nation ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , no
... taught throughout the country. That way,no student preparing for a common entrance...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...nce test gets an unfair advantage. Also sometimes schools can be biased towards...
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Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'community'?
Suggestion: community
...schools can be biased towards a certain communities or religions which can affect the curri...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... can affect the curriculum and thus the students mindset. Schools may also align the cur...
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Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... curriculum with their vision and belief . For example a school that believes in p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , like
...al events that have violent acts in them,like world war 1 or 2 , even though it is a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...olent acts in them,like world war 1 or 2 , even though it is a significant part of...
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...ough it is a significant part of history .If not , the same curriculum , there sho...
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Suggestion: If
...gh it is a significant part of history .If not , the same curriculum , there shoul...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...is a significant part of history .If not , the same curriculum , there should be d...
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Line 9, column 429, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of history .If not , the same curriculum , there should be detailed guidelines giv...
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Line 9, column 491, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ailed guidelines given by the government , on what topics to be covered and what t...
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Line 9, column 561, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d and what topics are inappropriate and cant be taught. However , there are som...
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Line 13, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...opriate and cant be taught. However , there are some students in schools who ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... we would require a different curriculum , which the government has to keep in min...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are better off in life. At the same time , the nation needs to make exception for ...
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Suggestion: .
...for students who are mentally challenged .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00313479624 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7558981696 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7185136139 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107594491213 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415226422036 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305962759166 0.0758088955206 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695281307372 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01284328465 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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