The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the wellbeing of that country's citizens.
The statement claims that a country's leader effectiveness is measured by examining the well being of that country's citizen. I agree with this statement insofar as it proves the effectively use of nation's resources. Additionally, a great leader is a best policymaker and this will effect directly the condition of country's citizen. Also, it decrease the disparate between rich and poor people in the country. However, in a country, leader has the limited access to reach all citizen. Well being of country's citizen is also depend on the contemporary economic condition of the country and this can not be changed by a single leader immediately.
One compelling argument in favor on my position iswhen a country's leader use effectively all resources in proper way then it will improve citizen's living condition. For example, in india there are huge natural resources. When a leader can use this resources like gass, coal, marine resources etc. in effective way, proper distribution of natural gass, expert the coal and import the necessary elements using this money then the country's reserve will be increase and then it is more likely decrease the price hike of all necessary goods. This will make all levels of people in country well and confortable.
Another argument is a great leader is a great policy maker. Today's one country is dependend on others country in term of import and export necessary goods. For instances, bangladesh has good relationship with other countries and they export the garment clothes and import necessary commodities like onion, oil, spices, many industrial raw materials. The proper export and import make the country's economy balance and this make the citizen well.
Moreover, a great leader can decrease the disparate between poor and rich. This will make the healtheir condition in the country. And this will reduce the number of homeless, foodless citizen as reduce disparate between poor and rich will decrease per capita income deviation.
However, the well being of citizen are depend on the economic condition of this country and this economic condition can not be changed immediately. A leader has the limited time and in this duration it is impossible to improve the economy properly although he can improve slightly but it can not affect ubiquitously on the citizen. For example, in india, most of the people like and support his leader, has a good relation with other's country and evoke in innovation but there are a hundred million peoples who are hunger, homeless and can not fulfill their basic needs because of their previous economic condition was not good. So it will not be even by judging the country's leader based on the well being of country's citizen.
In conclusion, a grat leader policy making, effectively use of resources, decrease the rate of proverty and corruption can make all citizen well. But it is difficult for a leader to make all single citizen good as there are many things depended like previous economic condition, the culture of this country etc. So effectiveness of a country's leader can be measured by examining the overall economic growth, overall living condition improvement of the country's citizen.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ources. Additionally, a great leader is a best policymaker and this will effect d...
^
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...der is a best policymaker and this will effect directly the condition of countrys citi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...condition of countrys citizen. Also, it decrease the disparate between rich and poor peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... Well being of countrys citizen is also depend on the contemporary economic condition ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ary commodities like onion, oil, spices, many industrial raw materials. The prope...
^^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... However, the well being of citizen are depend on the economic condition of this count...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...but there are a hundred million peoples who are hunger, homeless and can not fulfill th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11346153846 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68771517647 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394230769231 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 856.8 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5113434565 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.36 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501686183798 0.243740707755 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180114964597 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186914498018 0.0758088955206 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30512622952 0.150359130593 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178683828511 0.0667264976115 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ources. Additionally, a great leader is a best policymaker and this will effect d...
^
Line 1, column 281, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...der is a best policymaker and this will effect directly the condition of countrys citi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...condition of countrys citizen. Also, it decrease the disparate between rich and poor peo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... Well being of countrys citizen is also depend on the contemporary economic condition ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ary commodities like onion, oil, spices, many industrial raw materials. The prope...
^^
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... However, the well being of citizen are depend on the economic condition of this count...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...but there are a hundred million peoples who are hunger, homeless and can not fulfill th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 520.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11346153846 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68771517647 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394230769231 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 856.8 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5113434565 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.36 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.501686183798 0.243740707755 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180114964597 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186914498018 0.0758088955206 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30512622952 0.150359130593 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178683828511 0.0667264976115 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.