Government should provide free education to all.
Education is the crucial part of any person life. Getting a quality education after high school help a person becoming successful in their own career. Quality education in 21st century have become very expensive and getting inaccessible to middle class family students day by day. I totally agree with the author that government should offer college and university education free to all the students.
Firstly as the world is developing by each passing day, education is drifting away from those parts of the country where the annual income of the high school going students parents are not up to the mark. Lower middle class parents have to think thrice before sending their child into a good university because of the high annual fees and overpriced registration fees too.
Gem like students having great past academic results always lag behind due to family financial support. Many unicorn companies founders till now date have always addressed this problem in interviews because in their academic life most of them have also gone through this face. As government is meant for the people, certain measures are must to help those students who are actual worthy of getting scholarships and free education.
Secondly our own country India have given so many scientists those who comes from a poor family. If they were given advantage in the terms of education fees and scholarships. There might be a chance that we could have expand their learning potential by giving them every kind of resource which would have helped them to understand their potential to the upmost mark.
For example, Google alike child named Kotalya who was born and brought up in a poor family when got attention by the certain education departments with his outstanding thinking and analyzing capabilities. Authorities decided to provide him every kind of resource which his capabilities required to reach international education level. Now he is working for the Indian government and have became a resource like a diamond for the government.
Thirdly, as we all know newton was also born in poor family but when the country become aware of his true research field potentials, government provided him every kind of help for lifetime. Now newton is being known for his great inventions and his contributions for the science field. Evert country have their own newton in every part of the rural and urban areas both. Only our government needs to identify the need of free education for the students of their country. So that those students can become their own valuable resource in future.
I also agree that some students misuse the education funds after getting it from the government. Sometimes nation economy pillar often gets shaken if majority of the tax is spent in the education bills and providing to support to all the students. But as we know for every boon there exits a curse too. Certain reforms can also be made ensure that free education funds must be used only for education purposes. Free education for all should be implied to all the countries so that more students like Kotalya and newton are given to this world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... person becoming successful in their own career. Quality education in 21st centur...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun unicorn seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many unicorns'.
Suggestion: Many unicorns
...behind due to family financial support. Many unicorn companies founders till now date have a...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...nt for the people, certain measures are must to help those students who are actual wort...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'expanded'.
Suggestion: expanded
...re might be a chance that we could have expand their learning potential by giving them...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...king for the Indian government and have became a resource like a diamond for the gover...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion for the students of their country. So that those students can become their own val...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Did you mean 'exists'?
Suggestion: exists
...ts. But as we know for every boon there exits a curse too. Certain reforms can also b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2604.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01734104046 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5203122317 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487475915222 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 817.2 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2691043506 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.16 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.76 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28571988814 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856873836787 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103082265139 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140746983948 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111110788627 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.