The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Present-day civilizations are surrounded by machines. From dawn to dusk we have to use machines by any means. The prompt emphasizes that the human mind is superior to machines because human are the inventor of machines. I mostly agree with the position for the following two reasons, but I do concede that there are certainly a few exceptions.
To begin, Human mind has better capability than the machines. Every machines are invented by human. Human mind is the pioneer of any machines. For instance, To create a new programming code human first think. If it does not come to mind then human are not able to do any news things. Additionally, Wright brothers were not able to make a flight if the idea of flying had not came to their mind. So, no matter the work is human minds leads the idea to machines.
Furthermore, Human have to give directions to machines to perform. Without directions machines are not able to complete a task. Even, autonomous machines have the algorithm to word which is provided by human. For example, computer can not do a task without human command. Additionally, artificial intelligence are also a product of human mind. Therefore, human mind is the precursor of machines.
Finally, although human mind has the ability to think and able to create machines, they have limitations also. To think creatively human mind have to be trained. Without proper training critical thinking ability will not develop well to be superior to machines. In future there will be competition to think and create between human mind and artificial intelligence.
To conclude, human mind will be superior to machines for to reasons outlined above. But I do admit that to be superior human mind have to well trained.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...as better capability than the machines. Every machines are invented by human. Human m...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...new programming code human first think. If it does not come to mind then human are...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... a flight if the idea of flying had not came to their mind. So, no matter the work i...
^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... create machines, they have limitations also. To think creatively human mind have to...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94863013699 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76553553729 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6757395391 60.3974514979 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8260869565 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6956521739 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539990746042 0.243740707755 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197169561081 0.0831039109588 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126917950431 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363031937983 0.150359130593 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793791724292 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...as better capability than the machines. Every machines are invented by human. Human m...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...new programming code human first think. If it does not come to mind then human are...
^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... a flight if the idea of flying had not came to their mind. So, no matter the work i...
^^^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... create machines, they have limitations also. To think creatively human mind have to...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94863013699 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76553553729 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6757395391 60.3974514979 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.8260869565 118.986275619 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6956521739 23.4991977007 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539990746042 0.243740707755 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197169561081 0.0831039109588 237% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126917950431 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363031937983 0.150359130593 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793791724292 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.