ISSUE ESSAY
Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
They say God created human beings. In order to sustain life on earth, he divided them into males and females. There are certain physical differences between men and women but that doesn't mean that the tasks which men can perform a woman cannot. Consider any field; Politics, Sports, Freedom fighters or even your own family you will find men and women working shoulder to shoulder with equal intensity. So the physical differences do not make a difference in performance of women.
The most live example for contradicting the above issue is our own Mother. Despite of the physical differences, she is the most hard working and most reliable person in the family. From doing the household chores to working hard in office she performs each and every task with great zeal. Sick? Cannot find something? Hungry? Tell her and all your problems will be solved. Infact, she works a lot more than our father. Dads work in office and rest after coming back home. But Moms will never rest. She will work in the office, come back home, do the household chores, look after children and just keep working. There is no off day for her. She works for all the 365 days in a year and keep doing that all her life. So does physical differences make a women incapable of certain task. Absolutely not.
Another excellent example is Rani Laxmibai, an Indian female freedom fighter who fought against the Britishers while defending her territory of Jhansi. She is considered as the most bravest woman in Indian history. She fought a lone war against hundreds of British Soldiers (who were men), slashing everyone who came in her way. She proved to be strongest in front of so many British Soldiers. Despite being a woman, she did what most men wouldn't be able to do. Thus, there is a nothing a woman cannot do.
We all have heard about the Indian Nightangale, Lata Mangeshkar, an Indian playback singer who won millions of hearts by her mellifluous voice. She is popular than most of her male counterparts and is respected not only in India but also worldwide. She has achieved so many awards and appreciation in her life that most of the singers would have to live for eternity to achieve that amount of success. She is one of the best singers in Indian Music Industry and has proven to the world that women can achieve anything they want in life with passion and hard work.
So the message is crystal clear: Men and Women should be considered equal. And with passion and dedication women can achieve anything in life despite of the physical differences. They are suitable for any task. There is nothing they can't do.
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- Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which 50
- ISSUE ESSAYMen and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ferences between men and women but that doesnt mean that the tasks which men can perfo...
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Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...hildren and just keep working. There is no off day for her. She works for all the ...
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Line 2, column 752, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...fe. So does physical differences make a women incapable of certain task. Absolutely n...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'bravest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: bravest
...ory of Jhansi. She is considered as the most bravest woman in Indian history. She fought a l...
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Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the bravest'.
Suggestion: most the bravest
...ory of Jhansi. She is considered as the most bravest woman in Indian history. She fought a l...
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Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... slashing everyone who came in her way. She proved to be strongest in front of so m...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...te being a woman, she did what most men wouldnt be able to do. Thus, there is a nothing...
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Line 4, column 403, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nity to achieve that amount of success. She is one of the best singers in Indian Mu...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ble for any task. There is nothing they cant do.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249508840864 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.157170923379 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0844793713163 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0471512770138 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0628683693517 0.0444667217837 141% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.115913555992 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0353634577603 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39191462612 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0157170923379 0.030933414821 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0805500982318 0.0997080785238 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0235756385069 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0117878192534 0.0148568991511 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2603.0 2732.02544248 95% => OK
No of words: 456.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70833333333 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.309210526316 0.366273622748 84% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241228070175 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133771929825 0.200843997647 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0701754385965 0.132149295362 53% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39191462612 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52850877193 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 61.7925131401 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6194690265 165% => OK
Sentence length: 13.4117647059 23.380412469 57% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2781484454 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5588235294 141.124799967 54% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4117647059 23.380412469 57% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.205882352941 0.674092028746 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 37.5345717234 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.5 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357071699643 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0798702021062 0.123202303941 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0897985632323 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.366794081583 0.547984918172 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183286549685 0.149214159877 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952456854002 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780766454063 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297064241877 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0286877440313 0.0692045440612 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235077935693 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064421931082 0.0653680567796 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.88274336283 287% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.