Schools are the institutions that train for multiple phases of our life. Be it academics, co-curricular or sports-it is the place where an individual takes initial steps towards building his career. However, the current issue asks the schools to prepare the students for non-academic aspects of adulthood as well. By non-academic aspects it means to prepare them for the challenges they will face during their lifetime not only in terms of their career but also in their personal lives. Introducing such subjects will create a more creative and well-rounded curriculum resulting in further advancement of students personality.
Although I agree with the statement, I feel that school already prepares students for such situations. Since early childhood, multiple moral qualities are taught through stories and different instances which are instilled within ourselves. From nursery itself, a subject called moral science is introduced in the curriculum which teaches a myriad of moral qualities through different stories. Teachers explain the importance of such principles and how they make us a better human being. One of such stories is of a crow trying to drink water from a vessel. That story teaches the value of patience in our lives and how through patience and smartness anything desired can be achieved. Thus, with the help of such qualities, multiple situations of our lives can be handled efficiently.
However, I cannot agree more on schools going an extra mile to prepare the future generation better for other aspects of their adulthood. During adult years, individuals face many issues such as inferiority complex, peer pressure, jealousy etc. When not able to deal with such emotions they take extreme steps and make mistakes. For an instance, one of my friend was facing inferiority issues just because she was overweight. Due to nobody experienced or mature to share this with as well as unprepared to handle such a situation, she became a victim of depression. If there had been a guiding force in her life such as her teachers, then such a situation could be avoided. She would have emerged as a better individual if she had been prepared beforehand.
On the other hand, people may argue that in today's world more focus is on technical skills rather than soft-skills such as-leadership, cooperation etc. This is not true as major companies focus on such soft skills for an overall development of any employee. While hiring for certain management positions, rather than technical these skills are more focused. In today's era, multinational companies have started to introduce training related to such soft-skills to boost the development of their corporation. Therefore, one can never deny the importance of such aspects.
Furthermore, it can be argued that kids today are already burdened in academics and co-curricular activities. Even though schools start to take an initiative to introduce methods to prepare them for such aspects, they won't be willing to actively take part in such activities. However, to develop the interest of students in such teachings, a curriculum will have to be defined that should involve activities and a proximity to real-life situations. The curriculum will have to be relatable to them then only they will be keen to take part in such activities which ultimately will be beneficial for them.
To conclude, I believe that major part of our learning career is shaped by schools. At a very rudimentary level, when the human mind is malleable it can be prepared to face challenging circumstances and emerge as a winner. Therefore, if schools go an extra mile to prepare students for a better future, it is beneficial for us as well the society.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, i feel, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3111.0 2235.4752809 139% => OK
No of words: 600.0 442.535393258 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.185 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89303713922 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 972.9 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4419065996 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.35483871 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3548387097 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35483870968 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235132474632 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672229788671 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107520229967 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135681671405 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100518572352 0.0667264976115 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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