Companies which tend to increase its profits and achieve larger market shares may go against government policies. I agree companies trying to profligate profits will be contentious with government interests.
Firstly,Corporates will tend to break the rules and by-pass the law,thus reducing money to be paid to the government, say in form of tax. In 2015 Volkswagon offended for selling cars with emission much greater than norms set by the government, to increase companies market share.
Moreover,companies trying to make money,put more pressure on its employees ,by increasing working hours or by increasing work load. This creates a situation where people suffer from physical and mental stresses and become insalubrious.
In addition to these,companies try to achieve larger market share,puts small business into unhealthy business environment, thus creating a monopoly in the market. This situation is not much encouraged by the government, as government always look for diversified environments.
Corporates having vociferous desire to get larger will tend go in a path destroying companies staff health and also bypassing the rules and laws set by government.
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can you suggest me how to
can you suggest me how to expand body paragraph.
help me,my first language isn't english.
Thanks in advance
First, you may try this
First, you may try this pattern:
paragraph 1: introduction -- explain in your own words about the issue and give a thesis statement at the end. Give a reasonable not a dogmatic statement.
paragraph 2: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side A. First, ... Second, ...
paragraph 3: However, still I support side B. reason 1 + why reason 1 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.
paragraph 4: reason 2 + why reason 2 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph.
paragraph 5: conclusion -- reinforce the thesis.
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Second, read more essays by other users and follow their writing styles.
flaws:
No. of Words: 182 350
More content wanted.
For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
The essay is not exactly right on the topic.
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No. of Words: 182 350
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.42 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.751 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.049 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5