It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The topic can be interpreted from different angles for examining the threats and harms that might happen by compromising one's own beliefs. Indubitably, one's own belief in different aspects of this world and life is the most important asset one can have. Nevertheless, it is a good choice for oneself to put in another's shoes and see, experience and think in a completely different direction. Hence, I believe that it is not harmful to compromise one's own beliefs that to adhere to them.
First of all, sticking to one's own beliefs to perceive different aspects of life and world is a very self-centric way to live a life. One's beliefs are made from his past experiences and the way in which he perceives the world surrounding him. To illustrate, a carpenter will try to solve every problem with a hammer. In such circumstances, even if there are better ways to see a problem and situation in a different way, one is biased to stick to his beliefs. Definitely, he can survive by living with these beliefs but he would never come to know other ways to live a life, to tackle his problems, to get new experiences. He would be a frog in a well for whom, the well is the whole world and beyond the well, there is nothing to learn and experience. Consequently, adhering to one's belief will only cut down the size of the world to live in oneself.
Additionally, overcoming one's beliefs will give exposure to new perspectives and directions to look and feel things in completely different manner. For example, learning ways to socialize with an introvert will help him out more with his personality and to feel connected to this world rather than just believing some that introverts cannot socialize. In this aspect, the sky is the limit because one is not limited to a set of beliefs to live with. Furthermore, people with cabbage minded thinking can be seen in many television shows who only know how to criticize the happenings around the world and always be coming to the same conclusion that achieving success is not a cup of cake yet alone moving not a single thing to achieve something. Apparently, it is more harmful to stick to one's set of beliefs if one does not know whether it is good or bad for him.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 393.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62595419847 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74713252513 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511450381679 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3931031367 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.625 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5625 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171910166324 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717148239431 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058895430593 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13058147125 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347403611308 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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