It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
The author of the passage provided unrealistic evidence regarding the technique by which Kilanese created statues. he or she assuemed that the life-size statues were created from molds of actual whole bodies, whereas the miniature statues were actually sculpted. Moreover, he or she concluded that the miniature sculptures will increase in value over time, while the full-size creations decrease. The assuptions presented by the author were weak, thus the argument is unpersuasive.
First, the author claimed that the fact that the full-size sculptures were so precisely created which precludes its being sculptured and that it is more likely they were molded. The discovery of archaeologists of molds of hands and heads does not neccesserly mean that molds of whole bodies exist. If the author provides more justification for that point the statement may be strengthened.
Second, he or she points to the fact that only few sculpting tools were found. does that mean that these are all tools that were available back then? is there a possibility that the tools may have been destroyed with time?
Third, the final conclusion of the author is unjustifiable, he or she impled that the miniature sculptures were to be more expensive and the contrary applies for the full-size sculptures. On what basis did the author make this claim? In order to justify this argument we need data that concludes that hand made sculputres are more worthy than the ones created out of molds.
To conclude, ambigious word were used and several questions need to be answered in order for the mentioned conclusion to be justified, thus in its current state, the argument is flawed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: He
...ique by which Kilanese created statues. he or she assuemed that the life-size stat...
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...eak, thus the argument is unpersuasive. First, the author claimed that the fact ...
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Suggestion: Does
...at only few sculpting tools were found. does that mean that these are all tools that...
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Suggestion: Is
...ll tools that were available back then? is there a possibility that the tools may ...
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Suggestion:
...ools may have been destroyed with time? Third, the final conclusion of the autho...
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...she impled that the miniature sculptures were to be more expensive and the contra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, then, third, thus, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14391143911 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73010865724 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549815498155 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.417545715 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0157076481959 0.243740707755 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00708376212409 0.0831039109588 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177865822457 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0101317870037 0.150359130593 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124884408114 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.