Teacher's Salaries Should be based on their students’ Academic Performance.
annual students' academic performance reports of each educational institute is optained at the end of each year, it is regarded as a source to judge the overall level of advancement or recession of students' knowledge in the specific classes they attended. Nevertheless, can we say that annual reports reflect teachers' performance as well? Moreover, should this outcome be considered as a determinent of teachers' salaries? I personally believe that teachers are not fully responsible for the performance of their students, thus it would be unfair if the performance of their students affects their income.
it is well known that not all students attend classes regularly, some may even miss a tremendous number of classes and simply show up on test day, yet surprisingly acheive high grades. On the other hand, we notice a few ones who almost never miss a day to come to college and perform less on tests.
Ann Scott, a former university student conducted a research to asses whether it is teachers' competence that determines the final outcome of the academic performance of students or is it the students' efforts. Results revealed that it is actually multifactorial.
some may argue that adjusting instructors' salaries according to students' performance would motivate teachers to provide the best education. this is true ,however,it could also negatively impact teachers' performance by adding unnecessary stress to their work.
To conclude, students' performance is not determined only by teachers' competence but rather influenced by multiple factors and it would be unjust to reduce teachers' salaries if the performance of their students is not high.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 261.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34482758621 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03963531741 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3586003798 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.818181818 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299695598596 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119425673533 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934498733133 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177076887038 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915930278562 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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