Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
The crux of the topic is about past incidents does not help people to make an important decision in the present. I personally disagree with the statement for the following reasons and I am going to provide some epitome to bolster my stance.
First of all, past incidents influenced us and changed human behaviour sometimes, depending on how abysmal or benign the situation was. From our earlier days, we learn from past mistakes and as we growing, we gain experience from our past incidents, for example, a child does not know what is harmful and due to experience, he might abstain him from doing same thing in the past. So, past completely influenced our present decisions and past experience help us or abstain us from doing the same mistakes.
In any field past experience is pivotal, for example, in the field of scientific research or in the field of medicine research past research and experience matters the most. Modern innovations cannot be made if our forefathers did not lay the pavements towards modern research. In our modern day antibiotic is mundane in any medicine field and if penicillin was not discovered it would take more several years to reach the modern medical science and innovations and can not be done in a single day, we learn from everyday mistakes and redress the mistakes through the experience. Also, in the field of space exploration if we did not send Apello to the moon we might not still be in the dark about the celestial behaviour, that past experience gave us enough data and research ability that today our modern space institutes think about sun explorations. In the field of science, it would not be possible if Galileo, Einstien and Newton gave us the basic stage to understand the basic physics and math behind scientific research. Edison failed 1000 times before creating bulb and when he was asked about his failure he told that he discovered 1000 ways how to not make bulbs.
Not only in the field of science and innovation,past experience and past knowledge also help us and influenced our decision in our practical and diurnal life. For example, in our office and work it is vastly dependds on how much experience we gain in our working field. Works salary depends on their experience. For any field of job we lean through experience and we does not repeat same mistake twice in the future. so, past knowledge taught us and help us to make present and future decision.
Now, people might argue that past experience does not matter so much because there are aleays first time of something and future events does not cange such a divergent way even if we know the mistakes, but I would counter that, even if it is true there is always first time but it is also true that through gradual experience we achieved success, and successful decision can not be made in a second even intuition depends on past experience.
At the epilogue of the topic, from the above reasons and examples we can conclude that past experience and incidents help us and influence us to make present decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 437, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ly influenced our present decisions and past experience help us or abstain us from doing the sa...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... doing the same mistakes. In any field past experience is pivotal, for example, in the field o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esearch. In our modern day antibiotic is mundane in any medicine field and if pen...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...ark about the celestial behaviour, that past experience gave us enough data and research abilit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overed 1000 ways how to not make bulbs. Not only in the field of science and inn...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , past
...y in the field of science and innovation,past experience and past knowledge also help...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... in the field of science and innovation,past experience and past knowledge also help us and inf...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...f job we lean through experience and we does not repeat same mistake twice in the fu...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...epeat same mistake twice in the future. so, past knowledge taught us and help us t...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...decision. Now, people might argue that past experience does not matter so much because there a...
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...e in a second even intuition depends on past experience. At the epilogue of the topic, from th...
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...asons and examples we can conclude that past experience and incidents help us and influence us ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, for example, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2513.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 526.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77756653992 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78901763229 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59179867586 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448669201521 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.4214715045 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.611111111 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243142093948 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862397690197 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105084096221 0.0758088955206 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143157464996 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625797145384 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.