Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'knew'?
Suggestion: knew
AS we known once hostile country japan to united st...
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Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , not
...rica, share amity and simpatico realtion,not pridious child trun out be intillengt t...
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Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...t be intillengt through passage of time.Moreover, ubiquitous apothegm say ' life is...
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Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...e' implying that anyting can happen,so that past event sohuld not be conduciev...
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Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Nonetheless
...make adjucation in prevailing situation.Nonetheless, in modern age of science and techonolo...
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Line 1, column 487, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nal information stored of past situation help to make make adjucation anout curre...
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Line 1, column 497, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: make
...ation stored of past situation help to make make adjucation anout current event.likewise...
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Line 1, column 546, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , stock
... adjucation anout current event.likewise,stock market exchange use past data to value...
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Line 1, column 577, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
....likewise,stock market exchange use past data to value the price of current stock...
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Line 1, column 665, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... date of wreak havoc engender by natural disaster like earthquake,flood,strom etc...
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Line 1, column 691, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , flood
...der by natural disaster like earthquake,flood,strom etc buttress to minimize the dama...
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Line 1, column 761, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Even
...inimize the damage of life and property.Even though every thing is unpredictable,pas...
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Line 1, column 801, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , past
...Even though every thing is unpredictable,past event cannot be seen as to make pith ad...
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Line 1, column 955, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y being cognizant anout past event, auto pilot mode used by aeroplane and big pas...
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Line 1, column 1053, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ough use of its past flight information, hindsight also means of improving and gr...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...people known about their past events. However, everyting in this universe is u...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...table, we can anlayze the past situation,and yet to fail what to do what to in preva...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... to do what to in prevailing situation. for instance, there is footbaal match betwe...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Still
...t stronger team wil beat mediocre team. still, one cannot say accurately which team i...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay accurately which team is going to win the match.Moreovem, there is guy name Ni...
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Line 4, column 11, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreovem
... which team is going to win the match.Moreovem, there is guy name Nitesh kumar, aspiri...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'continues'?
Suggestion: continues
...ought for same post result was same, it continue for there four sucuccesive defeat. Even...
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Line 4, column 419, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nt is pith for making current adjucation , he could never be the chief minister af...
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Line 4, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifteen years.cosequently, prevaling mind set and gumption deal with amids situat...
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Line 4, column 591, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...evaling mind set and gumption deal with amids situation is cardinal for making a...
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Line 4, column 663, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Meanwhile
...r making adjucation not the past events.Meanwhile, intelligent agency of many country rel...
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Line 4, column 716, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...telligent agency of many country rely on antedate events for making their importa...
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Line 4, column 769, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...ents for making their important decsion.Moreover,CIA-american intillegency, gather past ...
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Line 4, column 777, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , CIA-american
... making their important decsion.Moreover,CIA-american intillegency, gather past information a...
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Line 4, column 893, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Once
...e very boon to make important decision. once bombast was carried out sucessively in ...
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Line 4, column 975, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...n past by terriost organization ceartain,in which local police and CIA both flux an...
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Line 4, column 1102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...they dicipher how to tackle the sitution , they have successfully impede serval si...
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Line 4, column 1128, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'impeded'.
Suggestion: impeded
...e the sitution , they have successfully impede serval similar bomb attack.Hence,kowing...
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Line 4, column 1162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Hence
...fully impede serval similar bomb attack.Hence,kowing about past events give better un...
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Line 4, column 1167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , kowing
... impede serval similar bomb attack.Hence,kowing about past events give better understan...
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Line 6, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Particular
...al and adjudicate the current situation.Particular coron virus unknown enity, which engend...
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Line 6, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rld enforce the world to go for lockdown , something once cosider not only quxotic...
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Line 6, column 447, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mpossible, since virus was uncanny to us ,no previous such detremental was seen. j...
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Line 6, column 488, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Just
...,no previous such detremental was seen. just as we konwn more about virus, things gr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, while, as to, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48158847306 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606237816764 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 891.9 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 320.199937539 60.3974514979 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.0 118.986275619 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 23.4991977007 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21482486663 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738478189621 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637986988716 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115537257716 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629821659293 0.0667264976115 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 14.1392134831 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 48.8420337079 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 11.8971910112 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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