Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
AS we known once hostile country japan to united state of America, share amity and simpatico realtion,not pridious child trun out be intillengt through passage of time.Moreover, ubiquitous apothegm say " life is unpredicatble" implying that anyting can happen,so that past event sohuld not be conducieve to make adjucation in prevailing situation.Nonetheless, in modern age of science and techonology, every thing is data drivine, cardinal information stored of past situation help to make make adjucation anout current event.likewise,stock market exchange use past data to value the price of current stock, past date of wreak havoc engender by natural disaster like earthquake,flood,strom etc buttress to minimize the damage of life and property.Even though every thing is unpredictable,past event cannot be seen as to make pith adjudication, many scientific and technological breakthroug are based by being cognizant anout past event, auto pilot mode used by aeroplane and big passenger plane through use of its past flight information, hindsight also means of improving and growing of person if people known about their past events.
However, everyting in this universe is unpredictable, we can anlayze the past situation,and yet to fail what to do what to in prevailing situation. for instance, there is footbaal match between stong and mediocore team, so throug hindsigt exegesis we can easily adjudicate that stronger team wil beat mediocre team. still, one cannot say accurately which team is going to win
the match.Moreovem, there is guy name Nitesh kumar, aspiring politican, he fought election for state legistion for he got trounce in his first attemp, again he fought for same post result was same, it continue for there four sucuccesive defeat. Eventually, he succede in fifth attemp, now he is incumbent chief minister of Bhiar- a satate in india, so question arise if past event is pith for making current adjucation , he could never be the chief minister afere severval sucessive defeat's in election in span of nearly fifteen years.cosequently, prevaling mind set and gumption deal with amids situation is cardinal for making adjucation not the past events.Meanwhile, intelligent agency of many country rely on antedate events for making their important decsion.Moreover,CIA-american intillegency, gather past information and analyze it, which are very boon to make important decision. once bombast was carried out sucessively in past by terriost organization ceartain,in which local police and CIA both flux and fail to stop attack, but after that event they dicipher how to tackle the sitution , they have successfully impede serval similar bomb attack.Hence,kowing about past events give better understanding of sitution and help to deal to appriately.
Meanwhile, kowing past event hold bearing for making adjucation in prevaling conditon, it all depend upon sagcious and gumption of person. And yet being cognizant about preceden events undergirds the odds to deal and adjudicate the current situation.Particular coron virus unknown enity, which engender to stop world enforce the world to go for lockdown , something once cosider not only quxotic but also impossible, since virus was uncanny to us ,no previous such detremental was seen. just as we konwn more about virus, things grdually comes to our control.
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- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2835.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48158847306 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 311.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606237816764 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 891.9 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 320.199937539 60.3974514979 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 315.0 118.986275619 265% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 23.4991977007 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.21951772744 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21482486663 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738478189621 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637986988716 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115537257716 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629821659293 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 14.1392134831 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 48.8420337079 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.38706741573 133% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 63.0 11.8971910112 530% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.