Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The governing bodies across the globe are responsible for maintaining law and order in the state and uphold the constitution by protecting the rights of people in the country. The prompt says that laws should be accommodate various factors like the geographical location, context, and period to make the justice to the people in the more refined way. Although, there are scenarios where the constitutional laws needs to be tweaked for particular group of people based on the conditions, the fundamental laws should remain unchanged disregard of any situation. It’s the law that make the society civilized and disciplined, helps us maintain peace and harmony, nurtures co-existence of different religion and propagates pluralism. Had the fundamental laws change based on circumstances, and then the very existence of objectivity is refuted for the following two reasons.
First, constitutional rights gives us liberty of speech. Every human being who belongs to a particular country has the free will to express his or her ideas and feeling, carry out campaign, raise voice against corruption and propagate his or her ideas. Rights were different for the particular group of people leaving in eastern suburbs of Ethiopia, reason being that, they were tribal and were reluctant to comply with the democracy of the country. Eventually, they were oppressed and the fundamental rights were never granted to them by the constitution due to the fear of the government that they will have to lose the geographical area if their voice was heard in the international media. Therefore, these states were never civilized and were target of biased laws framed by the government, following such paradigms of uneven law will certainly lead to disharmony and further suffering of people.
Unbiased and even-handed laws is the reflection of a progressive society. In the democratic country like India, everyone has given equal opportunity to context for elections and serve the country for the betterment of citizens. No particular group is favored over the other and the citizens are allowed to exercise their rights of enfranchise based on their choice. The existence of uniform laws like in India precludes any wrong person gaining the power and ruling the nation, which will certainly lead to fragments and lack of development on the country.
However, there are cases where we have to give special dispensation in the laws for other benefits. The Indian terrority of Sikkim enjoys relaxation in tax and other subsidiaries from the central government. It is the government own interest to retain the population in these high altitude border areas to mitigate the risk of neighboring countries expansionistic trials. But , fundamental laws are never compromised in any condition. It is imperative to maintain the fundamental laws across the country uniformly and have the other laws adjusted based on the necessities without hampering the willingness of the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'accommodated'?
Suggestion: accommodated
...ry. The prompt says that laws should be accommodate various factors like the geographical l...
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
..., these states were never civilized and were target of biased laws framed by the gov...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'targeted'.
Suggestion: targeted
...se states were never civilized and were target of biased laws framed by the government...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... favored over the other and the citizens are allowed to exercise their rights of ...
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Suggestion:
... other benefits. The Indian terrority of Sikkim enjoys relaxation in tax and othe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ing countries expansionistic trials. But , fundamental laws are never compromised ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32478632479 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95848345083 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5897947777 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.157894737 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6315789474 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68421052632 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110221217702 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350417717731 0.0831039109588 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281056708879 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068033882852 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279195405997 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.