Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
God has created two types of human beings , and those being men and women.Both these human beings differ each other from the infinitesimal level i.e,genetically their chromosomes pairs are different.So as the claim given it is not completely true, it needs more evidence to support itself.
Generally,when you address any man the first thought that comes in our mind is that the person will be tall,physically built,mustache,beard,etc . Whereas when you address any woman you think she might be delicate,soft,emotional,etc. All these factors supports the fact that men are always suitable for more physically oriented works.But don't you think that this all factors are assumed or are myths of ancient times? Can't women do any physical activities?
Women are underestimated for not being apt for any arduous work,they lack stamina,etc.But we should never forget that house wives take care of the entire house , from cleaning the floor to cleaning the roof. So,doesn't this require stamina,hard work? It is also said that women should not play games , they are not allowed to participate in any world sports tournament. This all happens because of the adulterated views of society towards women,if they given chance they also can thrive on their opportunity.For ex: We know Sania Mirza, Tennis player representing India has won medals which are comparable to Indian tennis player Leander Peas.
But,there are some aspects where women may lack due to their physical built.This can include manufacturing work inside any industry,this requires too much stamina,persistent labor work,which might not be favorable for women.Women here can assist in planning the job which won't require any physical involvement.
Through all those states points it can be concluded that god has created men and women for some purpose. With women allowed to support men in any aspect can lead us to success in a better way. Both men and women are made to support each other. Following women's step can lead men to success!
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237333333333 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.189333333333 0.157235817809 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0853333333333 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.056 0.0444667217837 126% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0826666666667 0.12292977631 67% => OK
Participles: 0.056 0.0406280797675 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.29757552629 2.79330140395 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.024 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.096 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.032 0.0249443105267 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0186666666667 0.0148568991511 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2005.0 2732.02544248 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.20743034056 6.0361032391 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325077399381 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238390092879 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151702786378 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108359133127 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29757552629 2.79330140395 118% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.48968727796 123% => OK
Word variations: 68.3280101097 55.4138127331 123% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0714285714 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.3507345031 59.4972553346 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.214285714 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.21349557522 614% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.9104378594 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.28181818182 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359038330717 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10059928187 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0677193506072 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575048830991 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.223817205169 0.149214159877 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128349275993 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554674300722 0.0892212321368 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.195162580894 0.385218514788 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0665294630234 0.0692045440612 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204310523651 0.275328986314 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018885216266 0.0653680567796 29% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.