Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
If we open up a history textbook, we find that the war for equality is centuries old. Women have been subservient in the patriarchal society for hundreds of years and the women suffrage movement is not a recent one. Women have been fighting for basic human rights such as right to vote and right to equal opportunities.
Given the inherent biological differences between men and women, I would like to turn to history again to bolster the argument that women have time and again proved themselves to be equally capable as men. Take the World War II for example. The period of 1935-1942 was an immensely critical one where countries were at war with each other, and great number of men were required to fight this war. Men, irrespective of whether they were trained or not, were enrolled into the army and sent off to war. Not only did women support their country and countrymen by taking up roles such as nurses and doctors at the war, but the ones that were left behind stepped forward to take up jobs that were originally believed to be unsuitable for the fairer sex. No stone was left unturned as women took charge at industries, farms, factories and as labourers. Note that not only did these women take charge but they also did the job equally well if not better.
It's not an obscurity that many believe women are not as ambitious as men and more inclined to taking care of the household and family. Hence, they are not suited for leadership roles at the parliament, corporate offices or governing bodies and institutions. I can cite the examples of many exemplary women that have debunked this sentiment. One such example that comes to mind is that of the ex-CEO of PepsiCo - Indra Nooyi. She started off her career as any other employee working at an office that was the bread and butter of thousands of people and one among many women who worked in order to be able to provide some financial support to their household. She worked hard to prove her mettle, not only caring for her family but also devoted to her job, she rose through ranks and was able to hold the position of CEO, which I believe is an admirable feat achieved.
Despite such myriad of examples of marvellous women, it is not a secret that women fight for equal wages and opportunities to this day. Many women even do not get the basic privilege of education and respect. Many are even killed at or before birth.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the patriarchal society is a thing of the past and we, whether men or women, are equally educated and skilful. It's time that we keep aside such differences such as gender discrimination and move forward towards a world that is more egalitarian.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2218.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64016736402 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46948770304 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508368200837 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6083333208 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.619047619 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7619047619 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172495078383 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527852621673 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290810043761 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947349671082 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256755317991 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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