Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
In the statement given, where men and women are not suitable for several tasks for their physical differences, I do not completely agree with that statement, I personally feel that apart from the natural differences on the basis of the XX and XY chromosomes and the physical differences related to that, Men and women are equally capable to do any work.
I would like to take an example regarding sports, in India we have two great runners , Milka Singh, a male, also knows as the flying Sikh, and on the other hand P. T Usha, a female, a great runner. Sania Mirza, who is a well-known tennis player, and recently P. V Sindhu, who got India a silver in the recent Olympics held in Rio. Apart from Sports, there are several upcoming women in almost in every field and are holding up great positions. May it be Finance or Technology, Women are now coming forward to take a stand and are proving themselves.
We have seen, injustice towards women in several ways, either sexual abuses or domestic violence. Earlier, it used to be a sin if a woman is more educated that her husband or for that matter any other male member in the family. She was restricted and confined in the walls of the kitchen and busy with the household chores. Whereas men were not supposed to enter the kitchen in the belief that they would lose their manly hood if they do so. But now in this modern era and with better education, people have come to realize that, if there is something a man can do, then, without any doubt it could be done by a woman too.
It's said that One who rocks the cradle can rule the world, though I believe that statement should not be confined only to women, as there are Men who are fathers, who take care of their kids and earn bread for their family.There are parents who educate their daughters/sons and see to it that they have reached their dreams, that is the mental strength that a daughter/son need in their budding age.Though most of the tasks could be done by both men and women alike, but everything has its own drawbacks sometimes works depends on physical strength or based on physical differences.
I would conclude with the belief, as it is said, "behind every man there is a woman", I would like to rephrase it for this modern era as "Behind every man there is a woman and behind every woman there is a man" and thus I would say, Men and Woman are equally capable and responsible for each others success.
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- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. 58
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...up great positions. May it be Finance or Technology, Women are now coming forward...
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...qually capable and responsible for each others success.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'apart from', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234468937876 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.156312625251 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.064128256513 0.0880659088768 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501002004008 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.060120240481 0.0444667217837 135% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110220440882 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0340681362725 0.0406280797675 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49366944606 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0200400801603 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00200400801603 0.0016655270985 120% => OK
Determiners: 0.0961923847695 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0200400801603 0.0249443105267 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160320641283 0.0148568991511 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2467.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 444.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55630630631 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.268018018018 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.204954954955 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.119369369369 0.200843997647 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0743243243243 0.132149295362 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49366944606 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 219.290929204 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509009009009 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 58.0214313594 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 37.0 23.380412469 158% => OK
Sentence length SD: 142.117811066 59.4972553346 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.583333333 141.124799967 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 23.380412469 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 57.4954954955 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.42105263158 1.64882698954 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276488798641 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102903414435 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0460284857956 0.077325440228 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613661922775 0.547984918172 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.235883997819 0.149214159877 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107971769026 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106413374665 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258948777138 0.385218514788 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0724591211753 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191903298487 0.275328986314 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113945210052 0.0653680567796 174% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.