Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In my opinion the claim asserted by the author is not true. Although, Men and Women have different inherent differences this not mean that they are not equally suited for many tasks.
Now-a-days the claim asserted by author doesn't seem good enough and has fallacies. As, it is evident today that woman have replaced many tasks done by men and so does have men replaced woman. In past women were not able to live from home to to do work and earn for their family. But, with the advent of the world and generation this tradition has gone down and women have started working and exploring new things. Since, it is impossible to stick to old procedures and practices when it was believed that women should just work at home and lack qualities of doing proper job. But, today we can see that women are performing quite well at many work which men use to do.
For example, women have replaced men at many levels such as Chanda kochar being the CEO of the well-known ICICI bank. Many women have also become police which firstly seem not possible as they lack strong potential. Women have also started participating in Olympics representating their countries and bringing glory to them, evidence being of badminton player P V Sindhu and Sakshi Malik who won medals for India in Rio Olympics. Many families also have both men and women working and completing their household needs. It is also evident that men have started working as a Chefs or at home and their wife works for their family. Even, men have started taking care of there progeny in studies and extra curricular activities.
But, it is also true that the task of giving birth to a child can never be replaced by men. But, the other tasks now seem quite pragmatic for both men and women to do in this world. So, the claim asserted by the author is not true as men and women are strong enough to uphold the tasks of each other even though they have their inherent physical differences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...Now-a-days the claim asserted by author doesnt seem good enough and has fallacies. As,...
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Suggestion: to
...t women were not able to live from home to to do work and earn for their family. But,...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...rming quite well at many work which men use to do. For example, women have repl...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a chef' or simply 'Chefs'?
Suggestion: a chef; Chefs
...vident that men have started working as a Chefs or at home and their wife works for the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252659574468 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.19414893617 0.157235817809 123% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0691489361702 0.0497285424764 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452127659574 0.0444667217837 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117021276596 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0797872340426 0.0406280797675 196% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.26645274223 2.79330140395 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0265957446809 0.030933414821 86% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0531914893617 0.0997080785238 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00797872340426 0.0249443105267 32% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0106382978723 0.0148568991511 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1947.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 348.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59482758621 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.258620689655 0.366273622748 71% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.172413793103 0.280924506359 61% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123563218391 0.200843997647 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0747126436782 0.132149295362 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26645274223 2.79330140395 81% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.1105222934 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4705882353 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.701431324 59.4972553346 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.529411765 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.588235294118 0.674092028746 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 37.7119675456 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.45689655172 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412960197471 0.391690518653 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10205460992 0.123202303941 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691272687118 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51676209759 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.112591356196 0.149214159877 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166925814629 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639219062035 0.0892212321368 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365738774316 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0606828305438 0.0692045440612 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311937381733 0.275328986314 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288357202928 0.0653680567796 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.