Nation should preserve any remaining wilderness even if it is for any economic gain
As the above statement is stating, we should conserve any remaining land that hasent been economically developed. we know that how important our forest are, they like lungs to these polluting cities and are shelters for many living beings. we should remember this thing called harmony, i.e, humans not alone in Here (Earth). so to do these things we need something like laws and rules and these are obviously made by the Nation or any higher Hierarchy of any entities.
As we all know, how people are, without any laws and rules. For example, in the late 1800's and 1900's there are less laws and rules for the women safety, so there were a lot of issues going wrong with women (say rapes and harrassment). As the time flies new regulations took place. However this doesnt mean that, there are no issues with women safety right now, but we noticed that cases have decreased a lot. The same goes with implementing wilderness preserving laws.
Protecting the wild is not only a gain for wildbeings, but for us too. Since we are in a state of constant and fast developing entities. The constant deforestation is a big major problem, and thus creating major issues like global worming and raise of sea level. And research states that, If this continues, we might endup in world which isn't suitable for living at all.
thus we can agree that preserving the laws for any remaining wilderness would definetly helpful, thus implementing these are definetly benificial.
- The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Quiot Manufacturing During the past year Quiot Manufacturing had 30 percent more on the job accidents than at the nearby Panoply Industries plant where the work shifts are one hour shorter than our 50
- Nation should preserve any remaining wilderness even if it is for any economic gain 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 251.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81673306773 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50289272493 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8708869929 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3571428571 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274435157429 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848981858973 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082872817285 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160971162644 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683899238891 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.