A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A student's overall education and development is an essential responsibility of a nation because after all the students are the ones to shape and mould the future of the nation. The prompt suggests that a same national curriculum must be followed by the all the students before entering a college, where they can further choose a topic of their interest. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the statement and explain my reasoning wiuth the position taken by stating three important factors.
To begin with, every student must be well versed with the rudiments and fundamentals of core subjects. These subjects support a student in building a solid and a stout base or foundation on which his further education rests. It is imperative for every student to learn the basics of mathematics, social studies, literature before he or she can commence to work on more sophisticated and advanced technology. For instance, a student pursuing an engineering degree in computer science technology must have a strong knowledge about the mathematics behind the working of a computer. This would reinforce his or her further comprehension on the subject and would be able to proceed with an uncanny speed in his respective field.
Moreover, following a same curriculum helps ensure that all the students start from the same level of knowledge. This is important to make sure that a fair evaluation of the students is performed.
In addition, the nation must introduce eclectic and diverse topics in the followed curriculum, so that the student can find out and further explore the subject in which he or she is genuinely interested in contributing. The students based on the evaluations can be certain about which topics captivate them and further accomodate them in chosing their college major. For example, if a student does extraordinarily well in mathematics and considerably well in literature and other subjects, he or she would be certain to pursue a major in engineering mathematics or related subjects.
Although some critics might argue that a student must be allowed to pick a curriculum solely based on their interests. However, with the exception of child prodigies, a majority of the students have no clue about their interests at a very young age and therefore defer this decision until they receive final assessments of their school examinations. In conclusion, a student therefore must be encourage to only pursue their interests after completing their school curriculum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: A student; Students
A students overall education and development is an...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing mathematics or related subjects. Although some critics might argue that a student...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...lely based on their interests. However, with the exception of child prodigies, a majority of the stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2086.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20199501247 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98226839654 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518703241895 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.535233557 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.375 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0625 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 5.21951772744 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232896100377 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824299167782 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084099530173 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147113782295 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884248091894 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.