A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until college
The primary purpose of education is developing a student's career by allowing the student to identify their predilections for a particular field. Therefore, the same national curriculum even at the school level for every student is not a productive option.
Every human has their foibles and idiosyncrasies. The job of an institution is to enable the student to make a living out of something which is amiable to the student. A lot of people by the time of completing school tend to lose interest in education due to the rigor they are put through for the courses which they do not like. Some even drop out of school because of this rigor, Albert Einstein, one of the finest minds of this world struggled with school precisely due to the curriculum of formal education. Einstein duped his school by faking a nervous breakdown. In my opinion he was pretty trenchant fo taking such a decision, as it allowed him to study what he really wanted. Hence , same curriculum until college is not viable firstly because it does more harm than good for a student's interest and secondly focring someone to do anything for more than ten years just for the holistic development sounds absurd.
The same national curriculum also limits the options of students even wanting a different type of schooling and at the same time, it also hinders the development of a nation. In every arena, whether it may be sports, education, business, people who have gone on to achieve great things and contribute to society have started working early. Einstein, Mahatma Gandhi, Nelson Mandela, Federer, etc. each of them today are reverent for their contributions, hence an early start to the predilections increases the chances of individuals contributing to the society and therefore help in developing the nation.
Finally, the same national curriculum also increases the spending of each student on education. Taking courses relevant to their field after finishing the rudimentary classes can allow the student to complete their school education early, therefore, affording them to rigor on the field of their interest early, also allowing them to save money which is a good trade-off instead of toiling over the classes which do not a huge impact on future.
The same national curriculum may be an efficient option in a case where students are not able to develop their interest hence toiling through a range of courses could help them in identifying their interest but even then the development of the nation is impeded.
To conclude, the same national curriculum has more cons than pros, therefore, should be strongly evaluated
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...mary purpose of education is developing a students career by allowing the student to ident...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...im to study what he really wanted. Hence , same curriculum until college is not vi...
^^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nterest hence toiling through a range of courses could help them in identifying t...
^^
Line 11, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore cons than pros, therefore, should be strongly evaluated
^^
Line 11, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...therefore, should be strongly evaluated
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74261455917 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.263401543 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.470588235 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4117647059 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268589748073 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952213250811 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101418103862 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168508053063 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464900755332 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
...mary purpose of education is developing a students career by allowing the student to ident...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...im to study what he really wanted. Hence , same curriculum until college is not vi...
^^
Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nterest hence toiling through a range of courses could help them in identifying t...
^^
Line 11, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore cons than pros, therefore, should be strongly evaluated
^^
Line 11, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...therefore, should be strongly evaluated
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74261455917 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.263401543 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.470588235 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4117647059 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268589748073 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952213250811 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101418103862 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168508053063 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464900755332 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.