The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority
Tyrannical leaders don't care about the well-being of society. Kim jong un , the south korean dictator does whatever he wants - from instructing the whole male population to get same haircut to starve the country's population. Realization about accountability has to be inculcated in the leader's mind - this can be only achieved by questioning our leader's actions. Although, excessive questioning can also hinder the leader's plan, but it is important to make the leader understand that they are accountable and their actions affect myriad of people.
Questioning insures accountability. It is a general human tendency to became careless if a proper check is not kept . Donald trump as we know is known to be erratic, he accuses teenagers(of color) aged 14 of rape and asks the law to assassinate them for their crime without any substantial evidence. Statement made by leaders can reach out to a large section of people which will ultimately inculcate hatred amongst the different community and ruins the well being and balance of society.
There is no way for common people to be heard if leaders are not answerable for their actions. Questioning acts as a mediator between people and the leader. The well being of society is a broader topic, the primary requirement is to communicate. Communication allows us to present our thoughts and reach a consensus, although sometimes the outcome may be contra-positve, but at least questioning allows to initiate a process for moving forward.
What is well being of a society? there is no right answer to this question. To some it is equality and to others is developement and prosperity. Whatever the answer may be, it involves leader's accountability of their actions. Before passing any new strategies claiming that these strategies will improve the situation of country leaders need to give the opportunity to the people to see for themselves.
Society as we know can equally take advantage of the power of questionability, but the leaders need to understand that the problem is not questionability. The real problem is that leaders need to understand that they are answerable for their actions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18390804598 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0880198311 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554597701149 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9955973734 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9473684211 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36842105263 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206526997226 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836942598365 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798871728656 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126167019355 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612084921528 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.