A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
While it is true that every one have their choice what to have and what to do ,but it is also true to understand basic knowledge for everything that needed to known for daily life.So i totally agree with that a nation should require same national curriculum until they enter college with below three reasons.
Firstly, school is most important part of any student when it comes to studies ,it is the fundamental roots for every brain to understand the world.Having same national curriculum gives every student to establish basic aspects for every subject. When student comes to school , they should have known facts to science , maths , language etc .For example - if one student in school have maths from starting and on the other hand another student have one foreign language in thier subjects.One student who went to buy grocercies and don't know how much he need to pay as he is not familiar with the 'add-subtraction method' , on the other part when Math student goes to interact others , it is not a possiblity that everyone speaks only one language. He will definetly find difficulty in communication. In all part , it is neccesary to have same syallbus in school for every student ,so that they can have fundamental knowledge to encounter basic needs for life.
Additinally , when a student opens their mind to every subject they can decide which they like most and lead their future in it.Most of countries in world actually goes by the idea of same national curriculum for every student.When a student have read and understand every subject like Maths or Music or sports .They can easily decide what they eant to proceed further in college.Having same curriculum gives them equal opporutunity to understand everything and decide their future on it .For example - one student who have subjects like , maths , science , language and music only . How can he know that he/she likes sports or not?.Having exposure to every basic note for everything gives them brighten idea of their inner choices.
At last ,school plays very important role in every student , having same rules , disciplane and curriculum maintains equality among students also , give chance to learn from each other and explore theri minds to different things in world.
In conclusion , having same national curriculum for evry student at national level ,give every student to explore every oppurtunity and give them basic aspects which can be used in theri daily lifes.So it is neccesary to have same syllabus in school so that a student can explore and decide their interestsand passion in which they can proceed theri future and decide what they want in thier college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00456621005 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60295689849 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452054794521 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.526265493 60.3974514979 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.555555556 118.986275619 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.6666666667 23.4991977007 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 5.21951772744 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 7.80617977528 461% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182376586494 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928434767582 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577955388287 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124655753877 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387074544871 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.5 14.1392134831 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 48.8420337079 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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