A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
College education is very important for students who want to pursue a specific skill and excel in their careers.
All students who are interested should attend colleges to thus enhance their knowledge and be better equipped to
solve the problems of the world and earn a livelihood for themselves.
A nation in my perspective should not impose the same national curriculum on all of it's students before college.
Different colleges conduct different entrance exam.Students should focus on the subjects of their interest that
helps them get admission to a college they wanted to get admitted to . For example a student aspiring to become
a doctor and preparing for medical entrance exam should not be forced to study history or other subjects.
Until middle school students can have same national curriculum. But high school students who are under pressure
of the studying for their field should be not burdened with unnecessary subjects.
We should shed light on the condition of high school students that are already juggling different curricular activities
preparing for national entrance exams. Such a nationalized curriculum which is not related to their field can increase
the burden of the student and make them more prone to mental health issues.
There are different colleges for different fields of study.We have medicine school , law school , art colleges,
military academy , science and engineering , sports academy . Different students have different aptitudes
and interests. Based on this they select a future field of study and prepare to get admitted to the same .
A sports enthusiast for whom it has been made mandatory to study a national curriculum beyond his aptitude is more of a
punishment . Thus we should make a sound judgement before enacting such a law. High school students have already crossed
middle school where they study different subjects and are now capable enough to decide .
Different nations have different policy
for the national curriculum .
In a country like India , education is a cabinet subject and is managed
by a minister. There are central and state boards of education and students are free to choose either for study.
The different boards of education like ICSE and CBSE are similar with slight difference. English is tougher and mandatory
for ICSE board students as compared to other boards. Thus parents and students have a choice to select a board
and study. Nations can thus communicate some common fields to be taught in all the boards in national
interest but having a single unified national curriculum is against the freedom of students. They should be
allowed to pursue education as they deem necessary in align with their future goals ,
without the intervention of the state.
In conclusion, Nations should invest in quality education of all its citizens since they are the assets of the nation.
When they are free to select a college , they should also have the freedom to choose their interests early in
their educational journey.Though some subjects can be introduced and taught in all schools for national
interest if needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2638.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 498.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29718875502 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69400627615 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447791164659 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8816913376 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.52 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.92 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.97078651685 624% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378174826566 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128151269344 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1272201407 0.0758088955206 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113924476298 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119292019953 0.0667264976115 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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