A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The recommendation suggested is quite provincial but the only viable and fairly pragmatic approach for a nation-wide curriculum. Though a parochial education approach enforces a uniformity in the evaluation of the students, but the grounds on which they are assessed is quite generic. There can be a raft number of both opponents and proponents of this generic model.
As far as the positives are concerned, the customization of education for a variety of interests is quite tedious an approach. Imagine laying out a format for hundereds of forms of art, or perhaps sketching an outline of a particular domain in engineering. The expanse of the problem is not limited to just the variety of number of course offered at a national level, but in the number of students enrolling in the subject as well. Offering a generic course curriculum is great for qualified exposure to the variety of fields of science, arts, literature and technology. It inculcates a respect for all fields of study and imaprts them fair amount of understanding to pick up a major not by fuke or inadverently but by rationality.
Many of the students are naive and in their adolesence, hence to ask them to choose a specific specialization might be akin to making the strings of their growth a little more taut then the upper limit. Thus the generalization of eduacation is necessary for both reconcillation of a myraid of students at national level under a cornicopia of courses making them less ignorant of the other occurances in the world apart from their field of interest. This superficial knowledge is important for the overall growth of an individual.
On the other hand, to place every individual under one roof is not completely logical an approach. One might be a completely different individual than the neighbour even though they might be devouring over the same bread. Hence the generalization makes them restricted in a sense. At time this extent is too much and leads to dropouts as the curriculum does not cater to individual needs. It is inevitable in a general course structure to tweak the material for every individual and thus creates a sense of undue burden.
Thus the trade-off between this genralization and specification of the course curriculumis quite important. One cannot be too specific in literature so as to make those who want to study universe feel discarded. There should be generalizationwith enough air of growth of specific indiv
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding picking'.
Suggestion: understanding picking
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Suggestion: than
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, apart from, as to, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06157635468 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11716902042 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519704433498 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8166470852 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.157894737 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3684210526 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111135589565 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323296045437 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028436538926 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619272367396 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179186778352 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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