Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
One of the natural sources of wealth for a nation is the land that is in its possession and how it is being utilized. wealth gained in the form of preservation of natural ecosystem by maintaining the habitats of animals and other wilderness will help in avoiding extinction of flora and fauna essential for living.On the other hand utilizing the same land for perpetuating the civilization and growth of society in the form of establishment of cities, industries and others will help in economic growth of nation which is very important for its development and making its place in world.
The fact that without nature and maintenance of its balance there would be chaos all over which may ultimately result in disasters such as droughts brought on by extinction of water resources, increasing atmospheric disasters brought on by extinction of trees which breathe out the necessary oxygen for us and so forth is a serious point to ponder upon. Since the wilderness is sometimes proprietary to that particular area and would not flourish as much when tried to grow the same in other areas, it would be a prudent decision to try to preserve it as much as we can. establishing the areas of civilization for economic growth can be controlled and handled in a way which can avoid loss of natural habitats ; In fact it should be planned as to make best use of the natural resources for further propagate growth.
Achieving balance between these two is the key to making development without destruction of nature. there should be forums established from various sides of this issue in order to closely weigh in the advantages and disadvantages that could come, in giving either side an edge over other and its overall impact on the growth of nation. this should avoid any disastrous decisions taken in haste.
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- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Wealth
...ossession and how it is being utilized. wealth gained in the form of preservation of n...
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Suggestion: On
...of flora and fauna essential for living.On the other hand utilizing the same land ...
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Suggestion: Establishing
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Suggestion: make the best
...ts ; In fact it should be planned as to make best use of the natural resources for furthe...
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Suggestion:
...esources for further propagate growth. Achieving balance between these two is t...
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Suggestion: There
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Suggestion: This
...overall impact on the growth of nation. this should avoid any disastrous decisions t...
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...ny disastrous decisions taken in haste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, as to, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92833876221 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8060721181 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 23.0359550562 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.394351024 60.3974514979 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.125 118.986275619 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.375 23.4991977007 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242659028663 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101471712054 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501660973604 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154040908325 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408383445008 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 14.1392134831 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 11.2143820225 153% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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