Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
wilderness areas are very important for animals. we need special attention to preserve wild areas. For past few decades, tress are cutting down at a very rapid rate. this is done to build infrastructure in the area or to fullfill the basic needs for humans. economic growth is important but not at the cost of the wilderness areas. The government should put some restriction on wilderness area.
Greenry is very important not only as a beauty but also as living. tress gives us the oxygen which is the most important thing in our life. If we continue to deforest at the same rate, then soon there will be shoratege of oxygen which can create disaster to human world. deforestation will not affect the life of human but also the animals. animals will be restricted to live in very small wild area, which will also be eventually short down. this could lead serious repercussion in near future. For example the rate of natural calamity has been increased in the world by 20% as per report of natural disaster Management Relief Organiation in 2018.
Now time has come to meditate on the issue of wilderness area. The government needs to act quickly and firmly to preserve the wilderness area. may be government can impose some restrictions on the wilderness area. we as a human has a duty to play in it. we can not play with the life of animals. we as people need to raise our voice to force the government to take necessary steps to prevent the wilderness area.
economic growth is also very crucial factor for our development with the nation. As the population is in increasing at rapid pace, we need space for living and the development of infrastructure. however, this should not any excuse for deforestation. The government should find another way out to deal such situation. may be they should consider changing houses to building to save the area. this should definetly will save some area. however, these changes have their own challenges.
To sum up, wilderness area are important for both human and animals. Each have their own requirement to full-fill the needs. but the equilibrium should be maintain between economic development and wilderness area and according to that nation should pass which will be beneficial for animal and humans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, then, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92467532468 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70448862602 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5376211413 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.3793103448 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.275862069 23.4991977007 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.10344827586 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301400195538 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849341705846 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678178792705 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193424934637 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692779358442 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.8971910112 38% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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