Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
The statement claims that the nations should suspend that the government funding when the country is suffering from unavailibilty of food and unemployed stating the
reason that the first priority of a nation is basic survival neccessity fulfillment. The statement correctly states that basic survival needs are the most
important needs for a country and hence
have foremost priority over other leisure activity but claim that the suspending and restraining the goverment funding of arts is not feasible because a states
success is determined by also its advances in various fields and arts is one major field contributing to measuring the success of country.
the statement correctly claims that basic neccessity fulfillment should have foremost priority because if citizen are not provided proper basic
needs such as food and shelter it will hinder their growth in other domains. also In country like India there are more than 50 percent of people
living under poverty line who are not able to met their day to day needs these people do not require leisure activites rather they prefer bread to eat.
In other african countries people are not provided with basic drinking water because of which they are drink harmful waters which often results in
noxious effects. Similar scenario in countries like syria where the government is investing in military expenses rather than considering other
basic requirements like food and shelter for the people of syria. The main priority of the above countries is to fulfill its citizen's basic needs rather
than investing in leisure activities or showing off.
The basic needs should always have the highest priority such as sanitized water, primary health care and food supplies because if these needs are not
satified the country might cripple by suffering from outbreaks of various diseases or other potential hazards. also parents in poor country do not
allow their children to get primary education because of high cost so this must be addressed first because if the illiteracy rate is high in that particular
region majority of people will not be able to understand various art forms and hence investment in such activities might be futile.
Though the above statements does not mean that the governments should not invest in other activities like arts because that would hinder the growth of
the country and will create a dull image in the world. As artist of particular country brings fame to the country. Famous artist such Leonardo da vinci
created so many masterpieces and inspired many other artist of his era bringing in fame for his country. also making his countrymen proud of his achievements.
because of large number of admirers of his arts many people visited his country thus foreigner would eventually visit the museum and increase the
economy of the country by promoting tourism which will have postive impact on the economy of the country.
The above statements justify that the topmost priority of the country should be satisfaction of the country because of this needs are fulfilled
the country might have a better chance of progressing and after the immediate goals are achieved the country should start focus on various other growth
which would help the country prosper such as investment in arts which might increase the economy in indirect ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2828.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 541.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22735674677 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49662322643 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439926062847 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 858.6 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.233198794 60.3974514979 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.533333333 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0666666667 23.4991977007 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145151195627 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547649766069 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576622557374 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0469014676835 0.150359130593 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543795273614 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 14.1392134831 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.